Reviews for Close
Anime Monster chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I could see Harley being one of those people who love the snow, she has that innocence quality to her. But I think smoke and explosions are more of a fall thing, then a summer thing.

Keep up the good work. :)
thebison chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Toccata No. 9,

Oh, it's been so long since I've reviewed, I'm so sorry! But everytime I saw an update of your's I couldn't wait to read it. By the way, I think it's wonderful that you write so much, even if they are just little drabbles. I'm really impressed that you have enough passion to stay with one topic, pairing, or fanfic world long enough to write fifty stories or so.

Now the review. I really like the poetical imagery in this story, but the plot was a slightly lacking. It doesn't really have much movement or purpose, and the ending feels like you just decided to stop writing.

However, I love the characterization and personality development. Especially the line about the footprints, it was so wistful and full of thought, but at the same time seemingly effortless. Nice job.

Yours Truly,