Reviews for Checkmate
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Himeko Sorano chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
It was a cute idea. Not much plot or action going on, but there wasn't a need for it. It was nice to read what could have happened with Ron and Hermione while Harry was playing the hero. I liked that you didn't make it obvious that Hermione liked Ron, because in the first book, there wasn't that much between them. A nice little ficlet.
mae-E chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
this was a very interesting story.

and i only saw 2 typos in the whole thing.

which is very good!


good job.
Galya chapter 1 . 2/23/2002
very cute...I like Ron and Hermione oh so cute
Yu Xue chapter 1 . 1/31/2002
very nice n interesting. you should write on book 2 or 3 or 4 on the other's point of view. book 4 would be not bad
Lora Tempesta chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
really good! read mine plzzzzz! click on my name and read it plzzz, it's called the Leslie and Hermione Series, plz read!
E.M.C chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
A great idea and very well written _

Had it not been for the '~' and the fact that I practically have the HP books memorized (dork, I know), I wouldn't have been able to tell your writing from JK's.

My only suggestion: you have Dumbledore say something about Snape not being behind it all before they go to the dungeon. But your choice _

Good job. I really enjoyed it.

Almah too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
How sweet! Aww! *huggles Ron, Harry, and Herm*