Reviews for Zoey 1803
JuneChild01 chapter 30 . 6/14/2014
I really liked this story after reading it all, but I think it got a bit long-winded after a while. Also there could've been more on the 'London's a Wizard' stuff, I was really looking forward to it. Also, sometimes your sentences have missing words so it's hard to figure out what you mean. I loved you story over all, such a good idea but very OOC at times, x
JuneChild01 chapter 24 . 6/14/2014
We don't have bills, we have notes, and £50 is rare to find and aren't usually excepted as they're usually fake. I'm 13 and have only ever seen 1 in my lifetime. x
JuneChild01 chapter 22 . 6/14/2014
The British also say making out, snogging is more what an adult would say. Also, we say Lads a lot to talk about boys, and McDonalds let you kiss over here, just to let you know, x
JuneChild01 chapter 18 . 6/14/2014
It's a shame is becomes Zoey's POV, I prefer Max, but it's still a good story. I really want to know what happens to Zoey.
JuneChild01 chapter 16 . 6/14/2014
I was hoping when you said Sara you meant like Sarah Baker, from Cheaper by the Dozen (Alyson Stoner). But this chapter was really good, despite being a filler, I enjoyed it.
JuneChild01 chapter 12 . 6/14/2014
I like this chapter and the Zoey-Meghan reference, but, just an idea, couldn't you have also had a Max-Alyson (Caitlyn) reference, since they were in it as well. Just an idea because I liked it and it's already finished.
JuneChild01 chapter 6 . 6/12/2014
I still love it, but this is a crossover, it's in the wrong section x
JuneChild01 chapter 3 . 6/12/2014
I really liked this story, I just started reading. Besides a few mistakes, it's well written and has a good story line. I can't wait to read what happens next! x
JuneChild01 chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
OMG Love it!
BelleZatannaRusso chapter 30 . 11/10/2011
And they lived happily ever after. I loved this story. You did a good job showing the characters, even if there were too many coincidences. You did an excellent job weaving in real people and characters, though part of me wishes the Russos were there.

This was a wonderful story!
BelleZatannaRusso chapter 29 . 11/10/2011
That was a wonderful breakup...I don't think anyone could have done better.

Of course, you got Disney Parks wrong (Both have a Haunted Mansion and Pirates...)
BelleZatannaRusso chapter 28 . 11/10/2011
The penultimate cliffhanger... This is a great job... I think I know who Zoey will pick...
BelleZatannaRusso chapter 27 . 11/10/2011
The revelations are interesting though I'm not sure how she would have accepted that Zack was Zoey- after all, dreams can leave you thinking weird things. James's return has added a new wrinkle to the mix.
BelleZatannaRusso chapter 26 . 11/10/2011
Yay! Maddie is alive! London saved the day! And Zoey's care paid off!
BelleZatannaRusso chapter 25 . 11/10/2011
Even more surprising ending...who did it and why?

I'm sorry for the driver, though the girls are doing the right thing to try and honor him.

And Max and Zoey are finally enjoying themselves ;)
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