Reviews for Who Saves the Hero?
awesomeness-rocks chapter 35 . 7/20
Fuck fuck fuck

-has just seen date of last update-
Guest chapter 35 . 2/12
such amazing story
i hope you find your muse for this one, again.
i love for it to continue.

greetings
a fan of your storytelling
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 35 . 12/16/2016
Very reasonable idea that the STG teams were what were expected to kill Saren, while Shepard's work was evaluated.

Good work with Tevos, and liked the Liara-Aethyta interactions

Seriously hoping you get back to this!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 34 . 12/16/2016
Very nice twist at the end!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 33 . 12/16/2016
I admit the fact that Shepard, male or female, would be sterile from what they went through, is something that I have not seen elsewhere in stories

Good descriptive work where the memories take over
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 32 . 12/16/2016
Very good conversation with Jack, and smart using the armour to get them to connect more
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 30 . 12/16/2016
The issue that Citadel Fleets NEVER helped humanity (even in ME3 it was petitions to the individual species) despite the fact that surely there were such agreements really does put anti-Council feelings in a stronger light

Yeah, those Keeper scans should have been taken more seriously
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 29 . 12/16/2016
LOL yeah 95% of the crew would prefer to not have to walk through C-Sec!

Fantastic meeting with the Council!
Especially like the detail that yes the STG would have access to examples of Indoctrination
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 28 . 12/16/2016
Very good conversation between Liara and Vasir, including how the Specter started to draw new conclusions

Ah, and that would explain why the Reaper's targeted the Shroud! Very good talk with Grunt spelling out the problems with Krogan in a way he could understand. The part about the fertile females was very chilling and believable
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 27 . 12/15/2016
Very good work with the conversation with Mordin about the genophage. Particularly appreciated the point about how Salarian species psychology may have overly influenced its design, and how the rage against the genophage was now why it was so crucial to maintain it. Tiger by the tail indeed

Nice stuff with Maelon. First that Wrex was aware of what was happening and needed Shepard's help, but also pointing out how mental instability might have been a cause. Very good that he is still being punished for his crimes
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 26 . 12/15/2016
Good kill of the Thresher Maw, and like the extra dialogue with killing Uvenk
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 24 . 12/13/2016
Really like how you note how much Shepard, any Shepard to reach that point in their military career, would have invested a lot of their identity in being an Alliance marine, and thus how harshly this betrayal would affect them.
Seriously hits it home when you realize that in two years it took mercenaries to recover humanity's hero's corpse, and for a terrorist organization to make it possible to pay tribute to the fallen Normandy.
LuckyF chapter 35 . 12/10/2016
Just found this story and wow ... Very interesting.
Still hoping the Liara will come to her senses and Shepard too. They clearly still feel for eachother
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 23 . 12/9/2016
New look at Vasir that is interesting. Generally portrayed as an outright villain after all
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 22 . 12/9/2016
Very interesting detail about the Shroud and how that could play in later for the story
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