Reviews for Intervals
acetwolf94 chapter 10 . 1/27/2017
NICE! ADD MORE PLEASE!
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
Heh, Evil Batman...Delicious! *Licks lips* Sorry, I just loooove good guys acting as bad guys. Especially the Bat. He's kind of an Anti-hero, don't you think? XD
4504048 chapter 8 . 4/13/2013
I read these all over, and over again, but I keep coming back to this chapter. I think this is the best possible way I could see Bruce/Batman shooting anyone.
Your metaphors make me so very happy. This whole series is beautiful. Thank you.
Toxic Sauna chapter 8 . 8/14/2012
Good story until Bats killed a man (and with a gun, no less). Interesting writing style.
Toxic Sauna chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Thought it was silly until I read the AN. A shadow, huh? Fascinating. Good read.

Oh, no. Slash.
goddesscal chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
This is just fantastic thanks for such a wonderful fic!
WintersRains chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
Hi there, I am too lazy to sign in but I wanted to say that even though I am only two chapters in, I really like what you are constructing here. I confess, I do not like small chapters but you make it work. I was looking for some more Batman/Joker slash fanfic and I recognized your name.

You were really working it with certain lines. Among my favorites are

1. The truth is, I'm a ringmaster.

I can conduct you with a finesse the dandiest of actors would sell their souls to insurance men for

2. I was tired of you the second my bea-utiful gaze landed on your Bambi eyes, chubby cheeks and pink, pink flesh. So easy to rip. So easy to destroy. But I decided to uh, spruce you up a bit. Make it interesting. Make you playable. And then I cracked my whip like the delectable dominatrix I am and you jumped through the blazing circles I set out for you, you were running round and round, headless.

I cracked up at the last one. I can see J saying these lines. Very witty and I did laugh. Good job!
LoveOfLiterature chapter 2 . 3/10/2011
I have read all of these chapters and I absolutely love your style. The final porn was so utterly complete that the only word I can think to describe it is perfect.

But what I most want to congratulate you on is this chapter, chapter 2: Ringmaster. I have read this chapter three times and posted it on a notepad for quick access. I think it is lovely. Your take on the Joker's perspective is great. It's got a focus and makes a point, but it is also bat-shit insane. And the last comment that is so artfully tacked on made me laugh out loud the first time I read it.

Bravo on some top quality fiction my friend.
Cyranothe2nd chapter 10 . 1/28/2011
*brain aspolded* Also, if this were Inception they would be Arthur and Eames fucking, jsyk.
Cyranothe2nd chapter 9 . 1/28/2011
Again, slaying me with the plottiness of this chapter and the emotional punch it packs. Wow.
Cyranothe2nd chapter 8 . 1/28/2011
Holy. Shit. Hold shit-this chapter! OMFG. Emotional breakdown and sympathetic Joker and brken Bruce...oh my. You have slayed me with this!
Cyranothe2nd chapter 2 . 1/28/2011
This chapter is just fucking perfect in ever respect. The ringmaster metaphor, the weird analogies and that last line...LOVE!
Battoailover5 chapter 7 . 1/27/2011
I must admit you have a very unique way of writing. most people can't write in second person for fiction and do it well, but you pull it off. That's very impresive.
Acrylic Stain chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
0.0 really shocked face. That...

was...

deep.

That was terrifying. I could see places...*shudder*

I SHALL GO ON! o.o shocked face
SavageHope chapter 10 . 12/4/2010
Fucking best story I've read yet on here.

Not just because of this chapter either.

Real. Raw. Powerful.

That's how you write.

Bloody fantastic.

Can't say anything more but keep writing.
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