Reviews for The Bells are Ringing
ScOut4It chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
I need myself a 'Mother' (then maybe I would be doing my homework instead of spending yesterday looking at *gasp* lesbian porn and today reading your wonderful story). Speaking of, I discovered that I like Viv Thomas lez videos because they focus on real interaction even if there is a thin plot line for a story. I'm glad about the mention of some other things that I hadn't heard of, I'll be doing some extra credit homework on those shortly.

This was a very nice chapter, great length, enticing content...etc. I've seen "Let the right one (come) in" and did enjoy it; I like your description of the different interpretations of it, mine was that it was sad because the little boy is bound to share the same fate as the older man from the beginning of the story (It reminded me a bit of "The Hunger" in that sense). Tadpole? Love it, have it on VHS. Sigourney Weaver incidentally was someone that I told my father "I wish she was my Mom" when I was a littler girl.

I think 'marking' is hot. Hot! Hot! So, I'm glad that she did it. I also like how Rosalie is a "do as I say not as I do" personality for the entertainment of the hypocrisy. (In regards to Bella coming, Bella swearing, those types of things)

Thanks again for being you :D
51readaholic15 chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Less humour, more sweetness in this chapter. Not that I mind, your notes at the end were funny enough for me. I'm sorry but you're just hilarious...

Loved this chapter, how it gave us a more in-depth view into their relationship, and into Rosalie's complicated mind. Liked how Bella was sneaky, very creative way to win :P

Was cracking up over the Alice/Rosalie lesbian porn search, that's just funny.

Update soon! please.

Maybe I should go nag your brother?
Jocelyn Torrent chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Hmm...you know, this chapter wasn't bad at all, in any sense of the word 'bad.' ...Except for maybe the good definition of bad, lol. Now I'm confused, and cross-eyed.

You know, in your PM, you seemed so anxious that I got anxious too. I was worried that this chapter would disgust me or something. But that wasn't the case at all. The way you wrote it made it very realistic and...touching. More so in than the previous case in my opinion.

Okay, I realize this is immature but when I was reading about Bella suckling on Rosalie all I could think of was Juno "You're gonna get huge and your chest is gonna milktate!"

Milktate...lol. Cracks me up. Anywho, I did enjoy this chapter. Thank you so much for writing it :) Oh, and geophf's workin on a new chapter? Watch me dance! :P

Paige
Avarenda chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
I actually really liked this chapter, it was sweet and kinda fascinating. Seeing Rose's thought process, not to mention the theoretical biological effects vampire venom has on humans, was fun to read about.

I can't wait for the 'family' visit.
SnakeBite94 chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
lol long chapters rock XD also *Bella looked up at me, and smiled a very private smile. "'Mother, may I?'" she asked innocently.* lawl that was epic! cant wait for the next chapter! :D
powerhungry chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Mhm, u could of broken it up, but it might've been a lil dry.

Good chapter, and I laughed my ass of wen bella said "Mama".
Sirens-Are-Singing-Your-Song chapter 5 . 3/1/2010
im so loving this. they are so hot. i love how dominating rose is.
darksinfulwolf chapter 5 . 2/27/2010
Ah, you just re-enforced what i love about you Rosalie in this chapter! I love how you make her so imperfected. You dont make her the perfect "girlfriend" as Edward was the perfect "boyfriend". I love the detail, as I have said before, and another thing I love is that you show Rosalies insecurities. Love the chapter!

Bye-Darksinfulwolf!
Crazy Stupid Faberrian chapter 5 . 2/27/2010
Your story is amazing ! I love your Rosalie, she is charming and your Bella is hilarious!

J'adore, tu écris vraiment bien ! J'adore l'alchimie entre Rose et Bella. Jsui préssée de voir Alice, ca va être très drôle! J'adore aussi les petites blagues que fait Rose à Bella

J'adore ton histoire, je suis impatiente de lire la suite !

Bisous
ima nut so what aka pussyninja chapter 4 . 2/27/2010
Oh my god dude! i gotta give you your props on this story... i cant stop laughing at how ridiculously niave bella is...oh man my sides hurt. really man...great job.
stroodlex chapter 5 . 2/26/2010
tabo...damn you'll find that in just about every household in the Philippines. i totally forgot what that was until you mentioned it.

Soo this chapter made me blush not because of what you wrote but *how* you wrote it. Very intimate with lots and lots of details...and it was tasteful (no that's not a pun, seriously) and overall very sweet.

and...funny.

A kitty.

I really enjoyed the end of the chapter though, it sums it all up.
stroodlex chapter 4 . 2/26/2010
great chapter, for some odd reason, I can and can't imagine Rosalie dropping the f bomb during sex and to Bella no less LOL. She's proper, she's cold, she's your stereotypical ice queen...but then again its a common fantasy to have an ice queen melt into a fiery sexually attentive lover..or wait maybe thats just me? either way, it works haha.

I enjoyed how Rosalie was also very careful with Bella, she always has to be mindful of her strength and her hunger. What's it like when the tables are turned?

"Why is it that Esme knowing something makes it so much the worse? The stories I could tell Bella about Esme and her escapades with Carlisle in his office at the hospital for goodness sake.

Nurse Esme needed an injection from Dr. Cullen." LOL.

Seeing your dentist regularly is always a GOOD thing and making sure that the person you love is receiving the proper care is another good and wonderful thing.
Enjorous chapter 2 . 2/26/2010
I wonder who came up with Bella's safe word. Because it's just a little too convenient that a cygnet is a young swan. Is it a sign...I think it might be, but what do I know.

-Enjorous
stroodlex chapter 3 . 2/26/2010
well Samantha is an interesting character for sure...charming at first, then she got a bit too persistent with Bella and Rosalie...THEN she goes and plays on Rosalie's insecurities which are actually pretty valid.

she's circling and circling around them looking for a weakness so she can move in...like a panther...how fitting.

the first time i read it i was a little annoyed that Rosalie didn't snarl and growl at Samantha's blatantly obvious ogling..but then again that's not like Rosalie to do that. In fact, Rosalie was somewhat nonchalant about Samantha's advances on Bella but then again, it wouldn't make much sense if she hollered out "NO SHES MINE! HANDS OFF!". That's uncouth and would show some serious insecurity...

towards the end, Rosalie's musings on her relationship with Bella and how long will it last, bi curiosity, children, marriage, is she being a fool for tempting this with Bella... ALL those issues that they will encounter, or already have encountered, well that made me sad because when it comes to Rosalie/Bella or even Alice/Bella I do wonder how that would *really* pan out...but I bury my own musings on it because I like happy endings and happily ever afters. Yo\ou don't have a problem addressing it head on...my point is, nice work on "keeping it real" even though it made me super sad.

oh yeah, Rosalie taking her slip off awesome.
Enjorous chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Mentioning that this isn't safe for work at the end defeats the purpose. Seriously, kinda made me a little embarrassed, well only slightly more than I normally am reading FF at work. But those lazy bastards don't need me anyway. But now I know better, and this is what I expected Christmas Surprises to be like. Light and fluffy, with just as much hilarity as the other. Well not as much, because there's less Alice. But more adorableness, well because there's Bella and Rose in there and do I really need to say more?

Oh, and I think I finded a typo "if I'm know who you're talking about, she's a lot prettier than me." I think there's an extra 'm' in there. Or I'm reading it wrong, either way.

-Enjorous
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