|Reviews for If You Just Believe|
| DaniWithGreenEyes chapter 2 . 10/31/2010
ive really enjoyed this, i hope you keep going cause im intrigued and would love to read more. i like the way you write and the flashing between time is interesting and gives it a different dimension.
LOVED the proposal, i would love to be proposed to while it snows :)
| jerseyhalliwell chapter 2 . 10/20/2010
i really, really hope you decide to continue this :) it's so lovely :)
| twilightnaley19 chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD. UPDATE SOON!
| jennayg123 chapter 2 . 4/11/2010
So glad you're continuing this! I'm totally surprised about Jake, but I like it!
| AydenMorgen chapter 2 . 4/11/2010
I want to kick Jacob for showing up on Christmas Eve like that. Just... ugh!
I'm really happy you're continuing this story, in case I haven't said it before. Can't wait for the next update!
| azure0610 chapter 2 . 4/11/2010
I had been waiting for this to continue but this chapter was strange. A bit too much detail. What everyone was wearing and the descriptions of their hair, makeup, shoes, etc - too much detail. The cars lining the street in detail and color and model - too much.
The song felt off and then no real explanation except a hasty "she broke up with her sweetheart"
And the that Jacob stuff just seemed thrown in 3 years later. It was a bit too much packed into one chapter and now it's confusing.
| andii cullen pattinson chapter 2 . 4/11/2010
I HATE Jacob!
| teacher1209 chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Oh this was so beautiful! I loved the snowflakes when he proposed! Can't wait for the rest of the chapters!
| azure0610 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Adorable proposal. I couldn't place the song so I youtubed it and it was a lightbulb moment. I LOVE that song. That's one of the ones that you start listening to ON Thanksgiving that gets you in the spirit.
I want to drop this one shot in front of the boyfriend for some inspiration down the line. But I'd rather real snow be falling but this was pretty.
The only thing though, I wish the proposal had been longer. And I love lemons but I don't think it was needed. It was longer than the proposal. It just felt too quick to be so pretty.
| andii cullen pattinson chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
iit sOO CUTE&& II LOVE IIT
| jennayg123 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Loved this one shot and I can't wait for the longer story :) Hope you participate in the wedding part of the contest too!
| lynne0731 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
I love it,I think it would be an awesome story!
| TourDeShore chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
This was a great one shot and I can't wait to read along as you make it into a story.
| twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
I LOVED THIS, LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD AND THE PROPOSAL. GREAT JOB.
| Alinka chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Very nice one you've done here :D