|Reviews for When She Said She'd Try|
| Anne Oying chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
This is amazing!
It's nice that you fleshed out the ghosts a bit more, giving them doubts and feelings instead of blind assurance.
And it flows really well! I love the rhymes too, heck, I love the whole thing!
| LovelyJovely chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
There are no words to describe how much i love this! This is written so nicely, the words just have a nice, slow pace That just flows smoothly. That was a good idea to think of what the ghost children were thinking all this time!
| LarFang chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
I love this story! I love how each ghost has their own point of veiw and opinions of Coraline and what she can do. It gives them more life in the movie now :)