|Reviews for Shocks|
| Help chapter 1 . 1/13
You need help. Your grammar and syntax is awful, incorrect words, etc... Most importantly, this story is confusing as hell. Congratulations reaching the end, indeed.
| 241L0RM3RCUR1 chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
curioso, muy curioso, pero bastante entretenido nwn
| Yo the light chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Piss off, mikoto-baka.
| satomika chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
after reading other fics, i've finally read the one that contains a kissing scene!
thank goodness for this fic... :]
| CkretAznMan chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Grammar issues, OoC issues, making sense issues, and ellipses issues. You need some work.
| Tetsui chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Hahahahahahaha! Oh, man. That's bad. So very awesomely bad.
| RyougaZell chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Dude... "(please insert the incredible long name i don't feel like writting at 2:00 a.m.)" is longer than "Hidro the Lost One" o_O
Anyway... complete utter fluff after the part when Touma thinks of the shocks he likes. And wow at the lame excuse Mikoto gave. Heh.
Nice one, nice one.
| Hefner J chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
This was a fun story to read and I bet you had fun writing it. Hope you have more to come, this is a good series.