Reviews for Shocks
Celecats1 chapter 1 . 1/20
um... you said you wrote this at 2:00 in the morning so I won't blame you for all times when I had to go back and reread due to bad grammar but other than that it was good I wish there was more.
Get a beta chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Very hard to read. Syntax and grammar are almost non-existent. Too bad, a cute idea going here... ~jsm
Help chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
You need help. Your grammar and syntax is awful, incorrect words, etc... Most importantly, this story is confusing as hell. Congratulations reaching the end, indeed.
241L0RM3RCUR1 chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
curioso, muy curioso, pero bastante entretenido nwn
Yo the light chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Piss off, mikoto-baka.
naad thora
satomika chapter 1 . 9/21/2012


after reading other fics, i've finally read the one that contains a kissing scene!

thank goodness for this fic... :]
CkretAznMan chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Grammar issues, OoC issues, making sense issues, and ellipses issues. You need some work.
Tetsui chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Hahahahahahaha! Oh, man. That's bad. So very awesomely bad.
RyougaZell chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Dude... "(please insert the incredible long name i don't feel like writting at 2:00 a.m.)" is longer than "Hidro the Lost One" o_O

Anyway... complete utter fluff after the part when Touma thinks of the shocks he likes. And wow at the lame excuse Mikoto gave. Heh.

Nice one, nice one.
Hefner J chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
This was a fun story to read and I bet you had fun writing it. Hope you have more to come, this is a good series.