Enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

I like the premise, but I skimmed a lot. The only thing that seems to relate this back to twilight are some of the names. I might skip a few chapters to see if it improves, but just not super interested at the moment (on ch 7)

I liked this very much.

This ending has got me thinking though. Esme being Izzy's and Bella's counselor is already wrong in so many ways. and she developing a relationship with their dad, and taking the position of their stepmom? i can't even think about it. it is wrong in so many levels.

Izzy was a bitch. Still don't like her and i don't think a year would be enough time for them to be this picture perfect family. carlisle as well. he had been a lousy father throughout all his life. when he gets single and is starting to have a good working relationship with both his daughters he goes and finds another "stepmom". I don't know how to feel about it. It is so many shades of fucked up. Maybe if you had showed their healing and etc it would not be as forced or rushed up as it felt. not everything, u know? but at least a little bit.

anyways. i had a great time reading this. leah was an amazing character. such a good friend i don't even have words for her. seth was a swetie. and edward was a cute boy. thanks for sharing it all. :)

Oh man I was about to have a bitch fit.. it sounded like he was dead I was like how could you do that

Good story !

Bella is a coward

Thank god, Alice showed up, LOL, LOL, LOL

Bella is fucking dumb

Holy cow, what a story! Couldn’t stop reading...

I always love a Bella and Edward HEA, but it feels wrong in this story, so far. I did not feel any of their chemistry as with Jasper. It is strange and hope I can root for their ever after.

"I don't know how long we stayed like that, but by the time I pulled away, I was fighting for air, and my body was tensing and relaxing, so far beyond my control I could barely even think."

Who are they fooling. They have loads of passion. Why can they not be more than friends?

Edward seems more like a side character than a romantic interest.

Where's my Esme? *Cries*

Where the fuck Is my sweet Esme? Bring her the fuck back! I need her!

I'm sorry but, WHO THE FUCK IS MAMERE?

Hmm, I was very nervous when I heard the name James. But how bad can he be if he is Angela's bro. However it was very smart of Bella to alert Emmett to where she was going and with whom.