They should just kill Edward. Best to kill him now so he doesn't become a problem later on

Also I've got no sympathy for Edward or Alice. They did it to themselves and they have to deal with the consequences I hope Bella doesn't just forgive Edward if they ever meet.

Maybe rose and Bella will become friends. I always did like a friendship where the two would bitch with the other with no real heat but be there to throw down in a second. Kinda like I can talk shit about her but it's cause shes my best friend kinda thing.

I hope Rosalie gets over herself because Bella is around to stay. I'm glad Bella clapped back though and it was LOUD just the way it should be. Hopefully rose won't be such a bitch anymore

I seriously hope Bellas birth control works for vampire semen because I so don't want her preggo. Its always so disappointing when a story has the couple together and barely married before they get a baby. Like they have no time to themselves and are now with a baby for the next 18 years. But that's just me and I still read twilight I just prefer stories that don't have that. I'm sure this story will be wonderful regardless. I am super happy about them eventually getting there. Plus there's plenty to do that doesn't involve penetration. I'm so excited. I hope we get some of the lemons in Jasper's pov

I love how this is progressing. The forehead kisses to actual kisses was amazing It's so nice to see this didn't take 10 years for them to get there. I'm so disappointed that I can't write a better comment but I usually write like I talk and it's so hard to articulate a better comment. Forgive me for jumping everywhere and having no flow. So anyway I loved the kiss and Bella basically shouting at him that she wanted to kiss him. The attraction and steaminess is amazing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm glad they're trying to go into this with each other. And while I love labels for relationships I feel like them doing this and easing into it is best for them. But that's also probably because it didn't take 90% of the story to get here so I know it will have a label before it over. I'm off to read the next chapter. (ﾉ)ﾉ

I also love the cuddles.

I'm sad Andy seems to be going down hill. I am super excited for Peter and Bella to meet. I hope they're good friends. Speaking of Peter I'm glad he gave Jasper that warning about seeing old faces. Hopefully it's just Victoria.

I love how this is progressing. The endearment from Jasper makes my heart flutter honestly. I want to give you the biggest hug for having a duel pov with amazing writing. Not to mention that you have explanations at the bottom for any abbreviations you used. Your attention to detail really shows that you care about the reader. I'm going to be so spoilt and then have to go back to reading fanfics that have another language and no explanation. I'm loving going through this story. Honestly I hate the Cullen's and that they left her. Especially the how of the matter. I hope Edward suffers and Alice too. Along with the rest of them. She ended a relationship with him years in advance and gave no explanation. He could be found Bella way sooner. But maybe it was the experiences that Bella went through that bring them together but I refuse to believe that Alice knew that. Before I forget to mention this like I've done on every chapter before this one I want to say one VERY important thing! I'm so glad you made Bella OOC. I always severely disliked how Bella looked at herself you know? And it made her seem like she wasn't worthy. I'm glad this Bella is finding out that she deserves better than Edward. I'll go as far to say she deserves a wonderful Southern guy. Perhaps maybe even one who was the youngest major in the confederate army. Definitely someone who will fight for her and I know he will. I bet he would even train Bella to fight. And that would be awesome. Speaking of fighting and touching I love what your doing with the touch. How the longer the touch the more they feel the loss. Love the progression and how they're coming together! Can't wait to read more. I've honestly been blessed that this is already finished.

Screw Alice and Edward.

I love it! I hope Edward suffers for leaving her like that. I can't wait till she meets Jasper. Love the confidence I just hope it becomes more real to her. That's the thing about confidence sometimes you can fake it till you make it because no one else knows the truth. I wonder if her not feeling emotions is her disassociating or her shield evolving.

i hope everything woth your mother in law worked out ok. i know how scary a cancer diagnosis is. im 37 and was diagnosed a year ago with stage 4 breast cancer. thinking of you and your family while i read your amazing story. good vibes and well wishes to you and yours!

she wouldnt need an IV in both arms. they an push multiple neds into ust the one. its the whole point of an IV

I love the way you write so much! The characters and plot kept me hooked all day as soon as I had a break. I need to sleep... but maybe one more chapter? ahah

I love this! So many stories jump straight to the sex and intimacy, and don’t give any relationship first. I love how cutesy and sweet they are trying to get to know each other. This is one of my favorite fanfics I’ve ever read.