|Reviews for Friends with Benefits|
| NerdGirl19 chapter 7 . 3/3
This is such a skillfully done fanfiction! Keep it up!
| God of Death and Disease chapter 17 . 12/18/2013
Well gotta say, damn good job. Keep it up.
This thing truly feels like the real deal. Right amounts of violence, surprises, foul language and other things. And it doesn't happen often I laugh out loud while reading so congratulations.
| TWILLINATOR chapter 32 . 10/16/2013
loved it, jm1681 (Dutch). would lol if you had the last line as ... "rock",said Revy "yeah" said rock "i'm pregnant".
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/3/2013
I'm loving this fanfiction sucks that it's over I was sad when I saw the last update date I was like I missed so much
| xim-chan chapter 5 . 9/20/2013
Just a correction, it's "mal nacido" not mainacido. Besides that, good story.
| ThePhenakism chapter 32 . 9/15/2013
OMG Fucking amazing story, awesome work!
| Fluffyman chapter 32 . 8/18/2013
Finished it, really loved it.
The amount of detail you put in it is great, for example the unit code in chapter 25 as they entered the security check in the US embassy..."Foxtrot Uniform Charlie Kilo" hahaha :D
A very well written fic.
I'm just curious about one thing, in chapter 24 you said this :
"Of course my mind will continue to wander, and I'll always be thinking and writing, so who knows what will happen when I get bored again"
Was this before you came up with this ending or is there still a chance that you might continue this story someday?
| Fluffyman chapter 12 . 8/17/2013
"Revy immediately went on the defensive, "Sorry to burst your bubble, Romeo; I ain't takin' it up the ass like some fuckin' porn star"
Hahaha this one really got me! Instantly reminded me of the scene in the anime (season 1, dont know the episode anymore) where Revy, Rock and Balalaika were watching porn and Revy asked "Is she taking it up the ass?!" with a O.O look on her face.
Nice referring to it! :)
Anyways Im really enjoying this fic so far. Revy totally changed but it feels realistic, nothing out of the sudden. And I really liked that Rock accepted her gun without talking back, the fact that she is giving him her own gun which she carried through her terrible childhood means alot, it kinda shows how much she loves Rock. Very nice idea.
Im looking forward to the rest and luckily you have alot of other Black Lagoon fic's too, got plenty of stuff to read :) Please keep the good work up dude, it would be a shame if you stopped because you are great. I read the message on your profil and you really shouldn't worry that much (or at all), you're one of the best Black Lagoon (I dont read anything else) authors out there. Please continue writing!
| Fluffyman chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
""See that, Rock? This one's damaged goods. She can barely even hold her glass," Eda teased."
Haha epic line!
Really enjoying this fic so far, seems like theres still alot of fun ahead of me while reading the whole thing.
| Devil of Solitude chapter 32 . 8/12/2013
I held off my review until the last and done, reading from beginning to end. I think it is likely the best Black Lagoon fic I have read, likely even beats Guns From Nowhere too. Always wanted Rock and Revy to pair up, hell most have a hard time getting them in bed let alone a really nice relationship like what you've done here. I was a bit apprehensive and so like I said held off reviewing till the end, 5 stars of they had a rating lol. Loved this story and glad you finished it, really nice fairy tale ending for the whole crew too...it dose not get any better than this for Rock and Revy and the rest of the Lagoon Crew. Fantastic.
| chaos267 chapter 32 . 6/23/2013
Wow all i can say is wow that was amazing. You have there personalities down really well i can actually see this happing in cannon. Usally fics in minor fandoms arn't the best written but this is just amazing. I watched the entire black lagoon series yesterday and it became one of my fav anime of all time then i decided to start reading fanfiction for it. This is the first one i've read so far and it was amazing. It kept me entertained the entire time and you actually did what i haven't seen done so well before. Having sextual action throughout the story while keeping in the action. Most stories have like one or two scenes then it feels like they never get any action again this fic had nice tastful se scenes that didn't feel like smut plus the action was nice. Each arc was well set up. Although was a little confused what happend in the last one with ballianca at first but all in all good fic
| chaos267 chapter 17 . 6/23/2013
Thats got to be the most hilarious fucked up wedding i have ever seen...but it fits for there relationship so well.
| Typical Swedish Girl chapter 17 . 4/26/2013
Best wedding ever!
| Typical Swedish Girl chapter 5 . 4/26/2013
Chapter five... awesome stuff. The way you write, it's loaded and you don't use excessive words to get a nice effect. Love it.
| Typical Swedish Girl chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
OMG. This first chapter... You really know how to writhe that stuff. ;)