Reviews for The Courtship of Abigail Cornwallis
elh4587 chapter 14 . 7/11
The use of "I" is EXTREMELY confusing, especially as who the "I" is , is constantly changing. Then you have to deduce who the f*ck "I" is every single time I think this is due to overuse of characters. When writing you shouldn't throw in a hodge podge of characters. This Janeen whoever and Borden...mention them in passing, then u bring in this Kassandra and wilkins and their kids then tavington, Cornwallis, then Ohara and sarah and her kids. So between now 5 kids and numerous ppl it is simply too much. The story should focus on the main character and the rest are like extras. We don't need to hear about their kids. The cousin or janine (sp) whatever her name was (see i cant remember because u have too many damn ppl. One of these girls should be left out. If u want to do stories with them add them in as MINOR characters and do a story about their life after as an add on separate story
elh4587 chapter 8 . 7/11
they r at the wedding about to get married...dude srsly. u say i do in 10 seconds do u? yes. do u? yes . i now pronounce u man and wife. done.
guest chapter 23 . 12/3/2013
what an amazing story! i loved it! thank you for that
KittyKatieKlaws chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
Kassandra says she wont tell a soul, then tells wilkins as soon as he walks into the room. I'm sorry but that angered me a bit
Guest chapter 23 . 4/12/2013
Such a good ending. I honestly cried.
onecelestialbeing chapter 4 . 11/14/2012
Oooh I can never find enough of these fics! Yay!
blackleg chapter 23 . 4/28/2011
AWWWWWW! The last chapter of every story always gets to me! i think i literaly started bawling at the last sentence:( so sweet. Abigail gets to rest next to Charles and William
XjBellewX chapter 23 . 5/19/2010
hey such a good ending to it!

hmm wen are u happinging to put up Where Loyalties Lie?

just curious.

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Somnios et Veritas chapter 23 . 5/19/2010
I loved your story! It was so intense, and still sweetatthe same time! And Tavington got a happy ending!

I'm looking forward to your next story!
witbeyondmeasure90 chapter 23 . 5/19/2010
I loved it! Magnificent! Beautiful ending and I can't wait for you to post the new story! Hreat job keep it up girl!
witbeyondmeasure90 chapter 22 . 4/13/2010
That was adorable :)
witbeyondmeasure90 chapter 19 . 3/25/2010
That was simply adorable! Love it!
witbeyondmeasure90 chapter 18 . 3/23/2010
Wa! Loved this chapter! Yay Abby for coming out of mourning! And it looks like we have another happy couple!
GracingOctober chapter 17 . 3/22/2010
VERY good! I just seriously CANNOT wait for the next chapters! :) Keep up the amazing work! :)
witbeyondmeasure90 chapter 16 . 3/18/2010
lets see...tav being sent away for six months? gosh thats a long time /

keep up the good work! i love it
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