Reviews for Living A Normal Life
Miko-Chan chapter 9 . 9/25/2013
So close so close, neji and tenten almost kissing. So close. Again, another funny scene lol. Did u get the idea from the tv show friends when phoebe began screaming loads of bad words when ben's around. Haha, that was one of my favourite episodes. Again, another great chapter, so jealous. Wish I can were like you haha. Update!
Miko-Chan chapter 8 . 9/25/2013
Ok, I was wrong. This is re funniest chapter yet. Best scene, fooling naruto in the crushing hinata incident. Also love the sweet moment between neji and tenten at the end. neji lied in the truth and dare game, he does have a interest in her. Tut tut neji
Miko-Chan chapter 7 . 9/25/2013
I love this chapter, it's the funniest chapter yet. The naruto dare was the best and haha tenten fooled her friend. Your chapters are getting better and better each time.
Miko-Chan chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Great story so far, I love how tenten the main attention in this story. Also like how you introduce her, tells us immediately what she does though its already written in the summary haha
DhimondInTheSky chapter 2 . 5/4/2013
:) Hiiii! I've just read chapter two. I would've read it earlier but school has been a biiiiitch. XD Anywayyy overall the chapter was good even though it had mistakes. Another thing. When they're shouting, you don't necessarily need to put it in capital letters...I really don't think it makes that much of a difference though but yeah...And if you need any advice, you're free to message me. :) I'll answer.

CBF
DhimondInTheSky chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Hiiiiii! :) I was going through my reviews and I thought: 'What if my reviewers have stories too!' So I decided to check and see and you did! I think that the plot of your story is really amazing, but you have quite a bit of mistakes here. And no offense, it's just something I noticed. So here's some friendly advice :D When you're writing, whenever someone is talking "Like this," I should either have a full stop of comma before you close the quotation. Whenever they are thinking, you should either put single quotation mars 'Like this,' Around it, or use bolds or italics on it. And whenever you are writing a sentence, punctuation is key. Don't end a sentence without a full stop. Alsoooooo sign, is when you write your signature on something. Sigh, is when you breathe out air. Hope I helped you. :)
jinjurikiLover chapter 9 . 1/21/2013
Im extremely happy that u uploaded a new chapter :D dont worry i will still be a loyal reviewer ;) and obviously loved this chapter just as much as i did for the previous chapters :) love the humor XD good luck with the next chapter hope u post it soon :)
Animefangirl95 chapter 9 . 1/21/2013
Hola:) nice to have you back! Haha great chapter! Whew hmm little NejiTen action lol, if you don't mind may I request a slight bit more if ShikaIno? I like the pace of the story. Are the guys gonna find out the secret soon or in the distant future?
10pandaluvr10 chapter 9 . 1/16/2013
update soon, this is like my fav fic. im so excited that you updated:3
xXXButterflyAngelMistXXx chapter 9 . 1/15/2013
It's sooo good and adorable. ;) I hope you update soon :)
DarkAnonymous324 chapter 9 . 1/15/2013
I'm really glad you updated :)
Please keep writing
Animefangirl95 chapter 8 . 4/11/2012
I don't mind if it is cliche haha I loved this chappy:) but when are they gonna start figuring out who tenten is?
Animefangirl95 chapter 7 . 4/11/2012
Oh wow that was so awesome:) I've only played crappy games of truth or dare and your story made it seem so fun
Animefangirl95 chapter 6 . 4/11/2012
Haha sometimes it's fun watching Ino meddle
Animefangirl95 chapter 5 . 4/11/2012
Ugh aren't airports the worst! Haha but plane rides are fun:)
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