Reviews for The Case of the Stolen Statue
Laurel G chapter 3 . 3/6/2011
Please update soon! I really like it!
RobinRocks chapter 1 . 10/18/2010

Mostly because I thought it was a pretty decent chapter. I think I put this in my notes but I do very much like how you're planting the seeds of doubt into Watson's mind at this point, making him tear himself between his loyalties. I think it's a good basis for what you plan to have happen later in the fic (LOL YAOI) and won't make it look like it suddenly comes out of left field.

I hope you didn't do that French on an internet translator, btdubs. Odds are it makes NO sense. XD


88, Yao-Yao! xXx
Lawliet's Angel chapter 2 . 8/5/2010
Very in-character. I like the banter between Holmes and Watson. It's going at a very steady, well-timed pace. Looking forward to reading more!
Intrepid Inkweaver chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
I loved what Holmes said in French and how Watson had no idea what he said!
SubstandardProducer chapter 2 . 6/1/2010
CONTINUE! Your style is quite like Conan Doyle's, which gives this an almost canonical feeling; but at the same time, your style is very much your own. Nice touch with the French (awwwww *melts*) and Lakshmi! Can't wait for updates!
Prieel chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
And the mystery thickens! I am very interested in the next happenings!
Umino Akiko chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
"Mary was simply under the weather, as her maid had stated when we called; and by no means terribly sick." Damn. Ah well I assume he was involved. It would be very him to do that. lovely work.
Umino Akiko chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Is it wierd that everytime I hear about her I'm like "Hiss! Mary! Boo! Make her die! *kills her and chops into tiny peices and hides them in various places for the cops to find*" I dunno it seem a bit extreme... so yeah reading this my first thought was "Hmm Mary's ill...? Cool!" isn't that strange?
Cryptix chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
Aww, that's sweet. I can't wait to see more - and I'm curious to get more information about this stolen statue. It's certainly a strong enough metaphor, it could stand to be explored.

Also totally hoping Watson wises up soon. Can't you see that Sherlock needs you, man?
tanya13 chapter 2 . 5/17/2010
i love this story! i can't wait to read the next chapter, which i hope is soon!
FrenchGirl chapter 1 . 3/3/2010

Thanks for the fic. To review I'll advise you to get a beta reader for typing/spelling mistakes. And being french I would also like to help you out for you french sentence. It's a very nice addition reminding me of the movie and I saw it here and when he speaks french for us there was no subtitles and his accent is so funny the whole cinema craked up. However your sentence doesn't make any sense I'm afraid and I'd like to tell you why just to bring this bit more realism to your fic if you choose to correct it.

So first you need to settle on a "you" and use it throughout the phrase. Either "vous" which is more formal pronoun used in society and in poetry or "tu" which is more intimate and a direct address. Then the verb "knew" is spelled "saviez" for the "vous" and "savais" for the "tu". Finally "implore" means pray or if something is put behind then it means pray that something will happen. The right verb for "crave" would be "desire". So "Si seulement vous saviez que c'est vous que je desire". Or "Si seulement tu savais que c'est toi que je desire"

That's all for the little course.

Wishing you all the best for futur fics.
LyraHazelnut chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
seems interesting and nicely written (although i must say, your beta reader wasn't as thourough as she could've been). i'm looking forward to the next chapter, subscribing even! :)
Becky chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
This is really lovely. I like the dual feeling of bookishness and movie.
mildetryth chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Seemed interesting enough. :)
StormSeeker42 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
I'm glad there'll be at least two more chapters to this. _ I always read the stories before the author bits at the start, so when I got to the end and found no chapter 2 waiting for me, I thought: "No, one shot? Say it isn't so!"

And happily, it seems it is not. :D

Reading the translation of the French phrase Holmes murmurs to Watson got a very audible "aw" from me btw. :)
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