Reviews for First Time
Motherof8 chapter 7 . 7/13/2014
Cute story. Thanks
Motherof8 chapter 5 . 7/13/2014
What an idiot. Lol
Child of the True King chapter 4 . 5/21/2010
xDDD With that last chapter, it so reminded me of bellet, with the girl with her arms stretched out, while another person held her up...O.o

Anyway, its really cool so far... um.. why are you putting all your stories up for adoption?
Emmauk26 chapter 7 . 4/20/2010
OME that was AMAZING, so romantic, so cute, so sweet, love, love, love it, fantastic job hun, great ending, perfect.
2890 bella chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
the first chapter was good but i hope u finish the whole story.
kdillin chapter 6 . 3/22/2010
i cant wait to read more
kdillin chapter 5 . 3/22/2010
can we say jealous much
kdillin chapter 4 . 3/22/2010
love it
Emmauk26 chapter 6 . 3/12/2010
great job really love this story, thanks for all the chapters so quick, maybe you could use this for your english report, hehe, worth a shot, ;-D
twihard22 chapter 4 . 3/10/2010
OMG! hahaha great chapter! I love the Did Bella fall down again? Part! SO funny! haha update ASAP!
twihard22 chapter 2 . 3/10/2010
This is really great! I like your style of writing! Update ASAP:)
team vampire 456 chapter 5 . 3/9/2010
ong you cn not do that to me if you do not update in the next 2 days i'm ging to die plz plz pl zplz plz plz plz update very very soon claire plz you can't do that to people it's not fair
onetwoskidoooo chapter 5 . 3/9/2010
LOL too funnyy && cutee :)

Update soon
team vampire 456 chapter 3 . 3/3/2010
ong claire you need to update cliffhangers are so not cool in fact they make me nervous or more curious your friend shantel
looneyjoker chapter 3 . 2/26/2010
Yes! Emms back3 Edward opens the door? Or Bellas just pchyco and thinks that he might. x)

Anyways, great story!
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