Reviews for A New Age
Gunreal chapter 3 . 11/18
Did you pay for the good story reviews or you just delete the bad ones?
Aus chapter 4 . 10/10
Arya is really out of character and she is always crying. "With tears forming in her eyes..." Even with Eragon. Arya is supposed to be a strog elf. Stronger than usual.
Guest chapter 25 . 7/26
You would have done a much better job at writing the last book.
Vraenir chapter 5 . 4/27
Story is good but there are many plotholes. You gave Eragon too much power in the begining, but can't use it to just transport to Gil'ead. I have'nt finished the story yet but next one is that he can make a divide 100 miles wide in ocean from Ellesmera, while magic requires more power the further you are from place that should be affected. I like the writing although there is too much ExA sometimes. It could have been much better if you didn't make Eragon into a Chuck Norris right in the begining
Bladelight25 chapter 1 . 3/21
I haven't read the books in quite a while, but from my memory it seems as though you captures the characters qualities almost perfectly. Either that or I just really like the story so far and my brain is tricking me. A compliment to you on either point!
sortofbored chapter 25 . 2/15
This is a really great story.
Theswaggydropbear chapter 25 . 2/2
All hail the master! This is hands-down the best written and best overall fanfic I have ever read. I love the storyline, took a while to finish reading it all but I got there :) lol a great story, you're amazing.
1ayragonfan chapter 25 . 1/30
Ok I have to say that i wish you wrote the inheritance cycle this literally has to be the best fan fiction story I've ever read especially since there aren't many good ones out the about arya and eragon you r truly gifted with ideas and literature and I read this story nonstop all the way through (minus sleeping of course) and I have to thank u for that last chapter. To many people would have just left it on the end of the war but that was amazingly satisfying so on a final note thankyouthankouthsnkyoutgankyouthankyouthankyousoooooooooomuch I cant wait to read it again
LoZ chapter 25 . 11/24/2014
This was a great story. Thank you.
hi chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Guest chapter 25 . 8/17/2014
Write more chapters
teenwriter827 chapter 25 . 6/11/2014
Does it have to be the end?
teenwriter827 chapter 20 . 6/11/2014
I stand would seem that Arya is not pregnant
Balthazar.d.h chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
I read the whole thing read for 12 hours straight and was up till 1 am and took me longer to finish read it twice loved it you are a vary good writer if I had my way I would publishe this nice work I love how you saw it though ni have read some of your other work as well love this the most so thank you for this great book I think christopher could not and has not dome somthing this good keep on writing it suits you
teenwriter827 chapter 17 . 6/11/2014
Arya is pregnant isn't she? I called it.
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