Reviews for Loyalty and Legend
Rockerduck chapter 10 . 12/4/2010
Is it considered cheating on chapter 8 if I want to marry this one, too? Oh, I'm just going to marry the entire story! And I'm sure to live happily ever after with it, too. Thank you! :D
heatherek chapter 10 . 12/3/2010
Oh, this feels just so good!

i told you Kes/Hakim would work. They are like meant for each other! ;-)

Grat work, really. I love your way of turning things the right way.

Did I mention? It's -20 C here. Hot, sandy Sahir-al-Awan was all I needed 3
Rockerduck chapter 8 . 11/30/2010
Can I please marry this chapter? I think I'm in love.
heatherek chapter 7 . 11/4/2010
And an amazing save from the player with number 13 on her shirt... Yes, it's Kestral, she saves the Team Darion again!

I just love what you did ;) agreed with Rocky, it's 360 flip and it's totally cool!
Rockerduck chapter 7 . 11/3/2010
Hair Flip!

Not much to say here that I haven't already told you before! You gain 306 experience in action scene writing. I sense a level-up!
heatherek chapter 6 . 9/8/2010
Wow, this is simply amazing!

Thought you left us with that unfinished story, but then I log in and see that I'm behind with 4 new chapters! :D

This is truly amazing. Just love the part with Wise Boy saving Kes from the sandstorm.

And, yeah, about Chapter 6... Run, Forrest, run!
Rockerduck chapter 6 . 9/6/2010

Enter giant boulder!

Erm. Sorry, that got me excited! Don't leave me hanging like this, I demand moar!
Rockerduck chapter 5 . 8/27/2010
*tries to stifle an evil snicker* I love those two together; everything is possible. One moment they bark at each other and the next they're almost - almost! - kind towards each other! Hakim is simply brilliant in this chapter though it doesn't seem Kes shares my opinion there.


"What happened to your cape?"

"Lost it," he said briefly, passing the reins to Refec, who saluted and led the exhausted horse off to the well.

"Lost it? How do you lose a cape?"

"Surprisingly easily." He raised an eyebrow. "What are you doing awake?"

"Waiting for you, dumbo. You said you'd be back before sunset!"

"Did I?" He shrugged. "My apologies."



Poor Sabatt, I have a feeling Kes might consider her the perfect outlet for her pent-up rage.

On the other hand ... I WANT TO READ THAT!
Rockerduck chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Rawr! :D I'm enjoying this so very much! Kestral is simply *great*, she has me laughing all the time (okay, she *always* does that!). As always, I absolutely adore your vivid descriptions. As for Wise Boy ... I need to get used to his lighter side, although, of course, I know why he's in such a good mood ... yet. ;-)

You go, Kessie, show him who's boss! :P
heatherek chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
As always great. Nothing to add, nothing to cut.

Wise boy gets excited! And Kestral gets envious! Just the way it should be :D

waiting for more ;)
Rockerduck chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Oy! Janub, feels like home ... seriously, I adore your colourful descriptions of that barren land, I have always had a fascination with Janub (as I am sure you can tell). You've already had me laugh several times with Kestral being her usual, wonderful self, so let me tell you that I am impatiently looking forward to more of this! Did I ever mention that Sahir is my favorite mission? It tends to draw one right into the game. Excellent introduction, as usual, your professional writing style is a pleasure to read!