|Reviews for Naruma! A Magical Ninja|
| FicReader of Desert chapter 11 . 6/11
Chapter 11 is most funny))
| Reader chapter 11 . 5/29
I'm bored with your naruto so no longer reading. Pls change name of your protagonist from naruto to something else because he is more of an oc than anything else. Besides there being Gaara, the only thing naruto does which is canon is using clones. The rest of his abilities are from other random animes. I understand this is a xcover with many different crossovers, but your naruto is way more a oc then anything. Plus his emotional range up to this point of the fic has been happy go lucky pervert. Literally, your killing your character by not showing any other emotions.
| guest chapter 25 . 1/16/2015
I I guess it's safe to say that you're never coming. No big deal though , we all have lives to live
| Mookeypoop chapter 3 . 1/25/2014
| Partsu chapter 25 . 10/22/2013
wait...so Kisame knows Itachi is/was in contact with Jiraya?
good story bro!
| Wandering Sage chapter 11 . 3/15/2013
have to admit, was expecting yachiru to randomly shown up for a smooch.
| Anarchia chapter 25 . 2/13/2013
Well I decided to read this and I found it to be an absolute pleasure. I hope you begin the rewrite soon I'll be looking forward to it.
| RElarax chapter 25 . 1/6/2013
Awesome! Love it!
| CaptureGod-Otamegane chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
I thought it was Tuxedo Mask
| ImagineBreaker7 chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Great first chapter
| Ungodlyone chapter 25 . 3/3/2012
Cool stuff bro. Continue on!
| Ignisha chapter 24 . 2/20/2012
A year. A YEAR has passed since you last updated... Some kind of relief would be nice!
| 21Orphans chapter 10 . 1/30/2012
actually there is a card game named magic that was made around the time of yugioh but im not sure if its the same due to yugiohs decline lately they have started making more magic cards and its become quite popular
| 21Orphans chapter 5 . 1/30/2012
its garra or shukaku and i love your oc kirais quirk of maybe is hilarious
| Kur0Kishi chapter 2 . 10/11/2011
very very confident opening chapters. Free flowing naruto that fits into the plot without feeling like some over rated oc that somehow knows all the answers and makes the interaction stilted. Good job. Even the flirting is bearable and subtle, others make it feel so amateurish.