|Reviews for Dodging Bullets|
| The1WriterFormerlyKnownAs chapter 16 . 2/27/2014
Wondering if you've written a sequel to this wonderful fic about that hunting dynasty...I think I'll go check and see.
| Sorceress of the Trees chapter 3 . 2/4/2013
wow Angel of Mercy...that is pretty deep
| Fatecaster chapter 16 . 8/24/2012
I really loved the way you wrote this story! I though it was pretty crazy that you had them meet in Hell and she was one of the souls he tortured - heck, the whole plot is crazy. But absolutely, freaking, awesomely crazy! It's a plot that would fits beautifully into the actual Supernatural story as would the way you portrayed everyone. Kudos to you and this is totally going on my list of favorites!
| SolarSailor chapter 16 . 7/29/2012
This story was just amazing! I loved it all! 3
| FearIsHowIFall chapter 16 . 7/14/2012
| Furionknight chapter 16 . 10/24/2011
| hannaX chapter 16 . 8/3/2011
Absolutely loved this!
I liked the character of Lena in this story, her and Dean made such a good couple!
You had me hooked on this from the very beginning, and I couldn't put my iPod touch down until I finished it. Amazing!
| TheOneAndOnly37 chapter 16 . 4/18/2011
I liked the story alot, very good!
| Egyptian Kiss chapter 16 . 4/8/2011
Loved this story. EK!
| SPNluver18 chapter 16 . 12/24/2010
I really liked this story. Are you gonna do a sequal? Just curious, cause it ended just when their relationship started kinda it would be cool to see where it goes. Anyways just wanted to share my thoughts. I hope you consider doing a sequal lol. You're a wonderful writer, I really enjoy reading your stories.
| sam riggs chapter 4 . 10/31/2010
liking the story so far
| IronicallyUnconventional chapter 16 . 10/20/2010
I honestly couldnt stop reading this story ! finally a story where the girls not a blonde wimpy bimbo :')
| kim-de-lee chapter 16 . 10/18/2010
Just swingin' by to tell you that I really loved your story!
Even though I make an exception for some very rare pairings, I'm not exactly a slash person, and I very much prefer a well-written OFC to enter the picture.
Anyway, especially in a fandom like Supernatural, OFC stories are rare. And because they are so rare, it's even more precious to find one so gripping and well-characterized.
I loved the way you wrote dialogue. I could hear the show's characters through their lines. And even though you did this well with all of the canon characters, I have to especially compliment you on Lucifer. I always loved Lucifer's screentime, because he was so... so... well, suave. And apparently benevolent, in a really subversive sort of way. And his trying to seduce Lena in the last chapter was right on the point.
I must admit, I see the Sam of the show as kind of a whiny bitch who is Doomed with a capital D, and your Sam was really quite capable, and rational. Like the bad-ass brother Dean should have. So, I liked that too, especially since I'm not so sure how my perception of Sam has been clouded by my unabashed Dean fangirlying *grin*. Thanks for the new perspective on that part.
As for Lena herself: I really liked the angle by which you introduced her, her being one of Dean's old "victims" and his guilt over that...
I did not quite understand why her affection for both the boys grew as fast as it did. Generally liking them, I get, they're on the same team, after all. Her "my boys"-psessiveness after only knowing them a day or two was a little confusing.
But I do understand and very much empathise with why she forgave Dean, and enjoyed being close to him, found his presence comforting from the get-go. And I loved her for it. Dean actually having someone to forgive him for what he did in hell, someone who is actually in a position to do so, well, he really deserves to have that.
And you needn't have worried that Lena is mary-sue-ish. She's a wonderful character, and I absolutely loved her humor, her courage and her determination.
So much for that.
One of the things I thought I'd bring up as a critique point is... well, maybe that was a style element, but I recall a few passages where you switched from past tense to present tense, and that can be a little distracting from the story... This, and the occasional typo, was the only thing I could find to "suggest improvement" as they say, so, in conclusion:
Great story, and please keep writing!
PS: If you ever want a Beta, I'd love to volunteer ;)
| Hime4life chapter 16 . 10/17/2010
Awe that was so cute! So does this mean that Lucifer is gone for good? I sure hope he his. Though it was kinda sad when he was all hurt and what not. Update soon!
| angeleyenc chapter 16 . 10/17/2010
i loved it!