|Reviews for Compromised|
| mum2shane chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
wow love this story would love to read more
| Sylla chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
LOL I LOVED THIS.
Oh man, I was laughing pretty much from beginning to end with this – /especially/ when Balthier came into the picture. Oh, Balthier, you cunning rogue. /And/ the miscommunication with the "it wasn't so bad" is a positively Twelfth Night-like example of comedy of errors. XD
I did notice, however, that it veers suddenly into the present tense toward the end, starting with "She cocks an eyebrow and reminds him...", which jarred me and threw me out of the story (which was a damn shame). You might want to take a look at that (even if this fic is like a year old).
Despite that, this is still going on my faves list. Mega love.
| Monochrome-Muse chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Balthier you a**hole. Poor Basch.
| Teldra chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
*giggles* This is adorable :)
| SayuXx chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
That's exactly what he would ask her. :D
But I liked Balthier's last line most xD.
Sneaky man! :P
Cute story :)
| Gembird22 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
This. Was. Brilliant!
| Katey123 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Haha I cant believe he proposed! Great one shot! :)
| The Layman chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Hey, Balthier, Han Solo called. He want's his character back.
| RJJJ chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
haha. there were so many things i enjoyed about this and lines that were funny. my most favorite line:
"Now as the dear girl has no father anymore, captain, I feel I must insist that you make an honest woman of her," he drawled softly then rose and sauntered away.
haha. balthier all the way.
oh, thank you for this, luna! it made me laugh after a particular hard day.
| AshmandaLC chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
:D Honestly, I think the changes made it even better! :D
I simply adore how he felt the need to do right by her, and propose, even if he was a bit...off...in his understanding of the night before XD
And Scheming!Balthier is just devious. I'm sure had Penelo known he had planned this from the start, she would have done some very unpleasant things to him.
But again, writing about Basch being awak after whole ordeal was just priceless XD How embarassed and confused (and hurt, lets admit it. he was hurt) he was...it was just awesome! I wanted to hug him XD
You've done another great one honey! XD And I couldn't have asked for anything better :D I'll work hard to get something post-able for you :D It's the least I can do for you :D