Reviews for New York Love
Guest chapter 10 . 8/24
yes! So much better
Guest chapter 10 . 6/28
I actually like the original ending...haters gonna hate lol
juliet709 chapter 3 . 5/4
im sorry but this is kinda fucked up. he kidnapps her and shes fucking him. there is no way no matter how good looking or any other trait he may hold, that shes going to do that. no women would.
Kayleigh J chapter 8 . 1/18
i liked this one
darkdarc chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
I honestly like the first ending. The only thing I didn't like was that there wasn't an EPOV on how he killed himself. I think that it would have given the story an understanding on exactly how much he loved her. Other than that it was good, and I like that your story didn't have a happy ending. It shows that just like life, there's not always a happy ending. Keep it up with the good stories!
Steph A15 chapter 10 . 10/21/2013
I liked the first ending better, this one was still good
Steph A15 chapter 9 . 10/21/2013
This was such a sad ending but not all endings can be good ones.
the story was great.
cbzoo chapter 6 . 10/5/2013
now I must say I am enjoying this but can't imagine falling in love with a murdering gangster would happen so quickly, good sex does not make up for everything and Bella is not dumb
Twilightfanatic85 chapter 10 . 9/25/2013
I like the happy ending but also the sad one so I guess both are great! D
twilight rebel chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
This story rocks I absolutely love it
Phantom- of- light chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
I have to say I liked the other ending better then this one king of gave the story its whole feel and it wasn't what I thought was going to happen
bboth good endings I just liked the one before better

:) xx
Guest chapter 9 . 5/27/2013
I love that ending!
It was so sad, but sooooooo beautiful!:)
AnimeAngel115 chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
honeybun37876 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
nicole1962 chapter 10 . 2/13/2013
no sorry:)
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