Reviews for New York Love
darkdarc chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
I honestly like the first ending. The only thing I didn't like was that there wasn't an EPOV on how he killed himself. I think that it would have given the story an understanding on exactly how much he loved her. Other than that it was good, and I like that your story didn't have a happy ending. It shows that just like life, there's not always a happy ending. Keep it up with the good stories!
steph A15 chapter 10 . 10/21/2013
I liked the first ending better, this one was still good
steph A15 chapter 9 . 10/21/2013
This was such a sad ending but not all endings can be good ones.
the story was great.
cbzoo chapter 6 . 10/5/2013
now I must say I am enjoying this but can't imagine falling in love with a murdering gangster would happen so quickly, good sex does not make up for everything and Bella is not dumb
Twilightfanatic85 chapter 10 . 9/25/2013
I like the happy ending but also the sad one so I guess both are great! D
twilight rebel chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
This story rocks I absolutely love it
Phantom- of- light chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
I have to say I liked the other ending better then this one king of gave the story its whole feel and it wasn't what I thought was going to happen
bboth good endings I just liked the one before better

:) xx
Guest chapter 9 . 5/27/2013
I love that ending!
It was so sad, but sooooooo beautiful!:)
AnimeAngel115 chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
GROSS SHE GAVE IT UP ON THE 3RD CHAPTER. SHE WAS SOO EASY.
honeybun37876 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
nice
nicole1962 chapter 10 . 2/13/2013
no sorry:)
nicole1962 chapter 9 . 2/13/2013
this is sad:(
TeamEdwardDZ chapter 10 . 12/26/2012
To be honest I thought that the orginal ending was much better then the alternatif. I loved the story :) Xx
Guest chapter 8 . 12/21/2012
i loved the storry til about chapter 8 rely best storry ever but than you had to fuck tings up by letting jakob kom and rape bella relly WATH WERE YOU THINKING PLEAS ENLICHTEN ME! i hate jakob alredy and now you relly made me pist wtf i mean OK that he kidnaps her but do you relly have to let him cet his filty hands on her (thout you sed sche was only edward's) wel yha you relly rhithe wel dont get me rong i just dont get WY you had to do that but yha its your storry i'm just saying tath i dont like wath you dit with the holle JACOB thing ! sorry that wath i think
Edwards littel Pixxy chapter 10 . 11/25/2012
i liked both endings.
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