|Reviews for Host of Apophis|
| carismum chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
A great story and written so well :)!
| Yeshua chapter 4 . 7/9/2012
Nope. The Hammer was lost forever.
| Azolean chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
Finished. Glad I did finish it, after all. It was worth it. You have a lot of potential and at least one very good idea. I hope to find more of your stuff as I go along.
| Azolean chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I only just finished the first chapter. Mind you, I've been awake for more than sixty hours and still going. So, if I'm a little anal, I apologize in advance. However, this was a very short chapter and the sheer number of errors were rather disgusting.
Yeah, yeah. I'm six and a half years too late in mentioning this; but it was driving me crazy. You either need a much, much better spell-check program; or you need to invest in a good beta reader. I mean, really. More than thirty punctuation, spacing, and spelling errors in a chapter this short?
Other than my OCD being out of control here, I found the beginnings of this story to be very promising. I still appreciate the time and effort you put into writing this. Normally, I would have stopped at the end of Chapter One, due to how much I hate such a large number of errors in a text. However, I still very much look forward to finishing this one. Yes, it got my attention that well. I'm willing to suffer through to the end, because I can see how much potential it has.
In the meantime, I will withhold further mention of grammatical, formatting, spelling, and punctuation errors. And, maybe, big maybe, I will survive this one with my sanity intact.
| Rebel Goddess chapter 6 . 6/4/2006
That was so fun, though I do feel so sorry for Daniel. I love that Amonet betrays her husband in a way Sha'ure never would. Great story.
| Rebel Goddess chapter 2 . 6/4/2006
Enjoying this so much so far. I always wondered why more people didn't write Apophis takes Daniel as a host fics. Wonderful beginning and I had to love it being a page from "Danny's book".
| Amelia chapter 6 . 3/27/2002
| Amelia chapter 5 . 3/25/2002
| OrionPrincess chapter 5 . 3/25/2002
Oh, goodness... what a place to leave the story! I can't wait to see Daniel finally get rid of Apophis. Great job!
| Saiyan Jalapeno chapter 5 . 3/25/2002
ahhhhrghhh! please finish!
| Saiyan Jalapeno chapter 2 . 3/25/2002
i just had to smile when you wrote that Daniel was cussing Apophis in different languages, that sounds like something he would do...great ending..makes me wanna go on the next chapt...)
| Saiyan Jalapeno chapter 1 . 3/25/2002
eeekkk! not danny-boy! *starts to cry* i love it so faar, no one was OOC at all! especially Jack, you convayed his persona right on! )
| pettygrew chapter 5 . 3/24/2002
Really good! Yeah for Daniel!
| Korilian chapter 3 . 3/6/2002
Not a clue. Maybe she wants to take over. After all the girl already proved she's not stupid.
| Amelia chapter 3 . 3/2/2002
What's the request? more please!