Reviews for Take the Ice
Guest chapter 10 . 7/13/2013
I just can't believe what a total and complete BITCH Renee is!
winnodinno chapter 26 . 7/13/2013
Great story
rainbowlollipops15 chapter 26 . 6/18/2013
this story was SO amazing - the characters, the plot, everything was perfect!
Stranger8 chapter 10 . 6/18/2013
I feel sooo frustrated with how Bella is handling everything...
Ladybear0506 chapter 26 . 6/14/2013
What an absolutely beautiful story! Absolutely loved it!
Ladybear0506 chapter 11 . 6/11/2013
Awesome chapter!
SLKerouac chapter 26 . 6/6/2013
It starts as Bella is so lost. She's hurt both physically and emotionally. She fell because her mother pushed her and now all Bella wants to do is get away from her mother. To be on her own. To decide what she wants to do. Bella moves back to but on her way out of the airport she runs into a guy when she is having a hard time keeping all her things together while on crutches. There was a spark there for both. They know each others first name but that was it. Edward helped her with her suitcases, then got her a cab after she refused his ride. He tells her that he hangs out at a certain bar on a certain night with hopes that she will show up. Bella gets to her apartment. Things progress. She meets her neighbors. Finds out that her doctor there is Alice's father. Then she finds out that this guy that sparked her interest is Alice's brother Edward. So much happens during the story. Bella start to grow, to be on her own, to start to figure out what she wants. Bella and Edward become friends. It grows on both part but Bella is alot slower. She has no idea of what is happening. She reconnects with her father and gets rid of the mother. It is a story worth reading. Loved Edward throughout this story. He was perfect for Bella. He did not push her and was with her throughout all of her problems. I loved the last two chapters especially. It showed the love between Edward and Bella and that nothing would change that. Now especially that there were two little skaters in their lives now, their children. Thank you for writing this story. Was well written and flowed well. Keep writing!
cjames chapter 26 . 5/28/2013
Love love love this story
Justafan chapter 26 . 5/24/2013
Truly beautiful story! I love how you wrapped everything up at the end.
twilover76 chapter 26 . 5/20/2013
I really enjoyed this fic! Your Bella was endearing and your Edward sweet and sexy. Thank you so much for sharing your words.

Also... we need to have a face-off between the evil Renees ;) LOL!
edwardandbella4eva chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
I laughed when I saw the title of this chapter. Then when Bella said that chivalry existed in Minnesota...the term Minnesota nice was actually a sarcastic remark originally said by some dude in Wisconsin. Minnesotans are generally rude, selfish, and well, anything but nice. I can say this because I live in Minnesota. Technically I don't consider myself a Minnesotan as I am originally from Illinois but I have seen this first hand. The funniest part is when someone does something that they think is kind but isn't really and they say "Minnesota nice". So yeah...that was really long...
Miranda Jones1 chapter 25 . 4/25/2013
Please please please can you do an out take of Bella leaving the ice, her family's reaction, Marcus's reaction, and the medal ceremony?!
horseandbooklover chapter 26 . 4/20/2013
:) 3 Love it SOOOOO much
acbennet chapter 4 . 4/17/2013
So engaging!
lemonangeljuice chapter 26 . 4/14/2013
Thank you for renewing a love of skating. I look forward to watching hockey with the guys while thinking of Edward!
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