Reviews for Take the Ice
Kaity315 chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
hey i just wanted to say that I LOVE THIS STORY! i always look forward to ready it and i hope you update soon! :)
aerobee82 chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
This was a great chapter, and it feels much more encouraging. She has a long way to go, though.
makemeagryffindor chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
doesntmatterwhat chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
Love the chapter! i'm glad that bella's gaining confidence in herself :)
Annedoodle chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
Good Morning!

So, just jumping in here...


*hides behind the desk*

However, I chose to change that behavior today! (yes you are allowed to roll your eyes).

First off, I have loved the previous chapters, so much so in fact that I was fairly disappointed when I got to the end of finished chapters. Bummed actually.

But here you are, supplying my newest addiction. Thank you, thank you very much. (done in my very best Elvis voice, which sucks by the way)

Anyhow, on to the review...

Edward and Bella's phone conversation is so dreamy...

Um, no, your Edward is absolutely "perfect".

Aw, what great friends!

How in the world does Edward just "know" what Bella needs? I am vacillating between stalker and sweet.

Blades of Glory... he he he he

Punish me! Please!

I am interested in "Operation Bella". Are we going to get details?

*sigh* So, I broke the seal and reviewed. As you may notice, I write whatever errant thoughts enter my beady little brain as I read. Let me know if you ever wonder where the hell my thought process is going, I will try to explain. But let's face it, my thoughts are usually all over the place. You may not want to know.

Anywho, toodles till next time!

cvds chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
Great chapter! Loved it:)

Love Edward's sweete text messages:)So happy that Alice, Rosalie and Esme showed up to watch the Nationals with Bella so that she would not be alone.

Love that Bella goes back on the ice to decide what she wants to do. So sweet that Edward shows up. I love him he is such a sweetheart.
monomo chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
These two are so cute together it makes me sick ha ha. So glad Bella is starting to realize that maybe liking Edward and wanting to be with him isn't such a bad thing. And, yay! I scored the same thing as Edward on the SAT (LOL) Great great chapter!
mokanimom chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
Thanks for the extra long chapter. It is great to see their relationship progressing. And thanks for all of the great visuals. That must take a lot of work but I so appreciate it!
sharon89 chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
Aw, this is such a wonderful chapter, I love it!

I love Edward, he's so sweet... he knows when he can push Bella (his call and asking her why she doesnt respond) and when he has to pull back and give her space and time (breaking the tension by making her laugh). :)

A big thank you to Alice, Rose and Esme for talking a little sense into Bella and coaxing her in the right direction. 'Operation Bella', I like that! *g*

Yay, so good to see that Bella is back on the ice and it made me so so happy when she realized what effect she has on Edward... that she's starting to gain some confident.

Edward and Bella on the ice are so sweet, I was smiling the whole time! :)

Love the chapter and Im looking forward to more, so cant wait! :)
lulabelljane chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
What a lovely chapter...

From the girls coming over to watch with Bella...

To Bella and Edward and their matching outfits...LOVED that you included that outfit...I loved that on Rob!

To adorably sweet yet insanely sexy time on the ice between the two of them...and even more that she wants more with him.

ksm chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
She seems to have gained some confidence in the fact that Edward finds her attractive. Now she has to work on gaining confidence in the other areas of her life. She has to start taking control back away from Renee. She had a fantastic talk with the ladies and I think with their encouragement, she'll succeed.

mujisan chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
Yay for good girlfriends and yay for Edward's help on the ice. I'm glad she's decided to try to be with Edward and not continue on the path of self-loathing. I love how long these chapter are btw. Thanks for the update!
IsaKassees chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
I decided to follow your lead and join that author auction thing. I hope I did it right...

Now then, yes that is in fact progress. But when will Renee butt her ugly head in I wonder?

I hope you know if I wasn't a poor starving author I'd totally bid on you bb
grrrr.edward chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
ugh i freaking want this story to be real. so i can watch it, your words are so descriptive. its really awesome!

thanks for another amazing read!
carey1090 chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
Wonderful chapter. Love the interaction between Bella and Edward. Looking forward to more chapters.
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