|Reviews for Take the Ice|
| Spunkie09 chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Loved it! She really threw Edward off huh? LOL That was great.
| h0315699 chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
I found this story and was pleasantly surprised to find a great sports romance. I am a huge hockey fan,and it is nice to see such a great sport intertwined into a great love story. Keep on with the good work.
| dreampills chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
holy crap was that sweet. i want more cuteness btw the two of team, especially on the ice ) great job
| tiderider chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
thanks really like your story, the ice eye-off they had was perfect, cant wait for more, liked how rose described it as"always having someone on your side" cant wait for that to happen for them, against selfish renee...
| eliza-morgan22 chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
i really loved this chapter and cant wait to see what you come up with next. i love how they get together at the game and then how they talked at the bar. i thought that when esma screamed at the refere that was so funny.
| kellilly chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
OMG! I frikin luv luv luv this story! I will be pimpin this one out to my girls fo sho!
| grandsophia chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
AWNN ! such a cute chapter !
cant wait for mor e !
| yellyann chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Love it, love it, love it!Please update son:)
| Jeannec chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
That was a great reunion. They shold have exchange numbers.
| MandieMarmalade chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
"Sure, I still woke up much earlier than I truly needed to, but old habits die hard" - I know this perfectly. When I went to Jr High and High School I had to catch a 6:45 bus so I was alaways up at like 5.. And to this day which is 13 yrs later.. I still go to bed at 10 and up at 5/5:30 xD
Can't wait to see what happens at the winter carnival!
So loved this chapter!
| nikkiwindland chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
found this story the other day and i loved it...im so glad u didnt prolong their meeting anymore...it was so cute when they finally saw each other again..cant wait to see where u go with this story
| nicnicd chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
*BIG happy sigh*
Oh, I'm already gushing on you over twitter, but bb, I'm loving this more and more with each chapter. Seriously. I'm a fluff kind of girl, but I like it to have some meat to it, kwim? You pull that off very, very well.
I loved his reaction to finally seeing her again - the spraying ice, standing still in shock, getting knocked around a little. So cute. and I really liked what Esme said to her: "It's the quiet ones you've got to look out for, Bella. There's always something hiding beneath the surface." - thats a nice bit of advice and foreshadowing all rolled into one.
And their interaction at the bar was so nice! You had some pretty phrasings in that section, lovely.
Renee isn't surprising me, snippy one minute, demanding the next, belittling Bella's choice for living away from her as well. She's a worried woman, and doing anything to keep her daughter near. It's not the right thing, but she's probably SO used to Bella just going along with her that this slight rebellion is throwing her for a loop.
Kay, Imma stop gushing... for now.
| ladyshep chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
It was everything I wanted and more. While I am still pissed at Renee I know that Bella will get through it. And the min you mentioned Guiness I ran to my fridge and opened at bottle. Gah! I can see that BelLa will have her issues with dating but Alice was right if she just concentrates on being herself then she will be fine. Maybe she should get a dog or a cat to work on the responsibility thing she seems worried about. Yay guiness and trashy romance novels. Wow what a great chapter go you!
| DeirdreJG chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
very nice reunion!
this was a great chapter. i liked that Edward was all goofy during his first period of play once he saw Bella. Pretty darn cute!
| LadyTx chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Yes ma'am... there reunion was everything I hoped it would be! I'm a happy camper now... bring on the drama as you see fit! :)