|Reviews for Take the Ice|
| BoLuvsTwilight chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Great reunion. Loved it. But I have a feeling I'm going to get very frustrated with this Bella. Geez. You're a grown woman. Act like it. Renee has sure done a number on her. First order of business: get a lawyer and fire your mother.
| cvds chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Great chapter! Loved it:)
I really love the friendship between Bella, Alice and Rosalie.
Love Carlisle and Esme.
Loved the description of the game. I love hockey!
The reunion was perfect:)
"What do you do when I'm not around to catch you?"..."Fall, A lot." ..."Guess I'll have to stay close then." -so sweet and perfect:)
| MadelineRenee chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
I really like your story - it is cute and fun. Your writing style is very nice too!
| rubyrandom chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Loved. It. The reunion was exactly what I was hoping for! Edward spotting her and getting distracted... resting his arm on the back of her chair... *sighs*... I'm glad you're not rushing it!
Is it weird that I'm really looking forward to them casually skating together? I've been looking forward to that since the first chapter - so sweet and innocent!
Esme seems like she'll be exactly what Bella needs - a loving mother figure. Since Renee is severely lacking in that department. Plus, I always love Edward as a mama's boy.
Looking forward to the next update!
| Raewright chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Love the reunion! They are just adorable together!
| Amieforshort chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Great chapter, wonderful reunion. IMO, a reunion in chapter 4 was not too long to wait. I really hope that Bella sticks to her guns, and doesn't let her Renee muscle her into things before she is ready. Maybe it's time for her to get a new manager ;) Thanks for sharing, I look forward to your next update.
| grtchn chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
yay! together again! Bella needs to teach Edward how to do a double toe loop. I think I'd pee myself. Scratch that! Teach EMMETT!
| nerac chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
You know how I feel about these kids. LOVE them all sfm. :) Thank you so much for letting me be a part of this with you!
| mokanimom chapter 3 . 3/24/2010
I'm really enjoying your story. I found it on the Fictionators Teaser Monday posting. I can't wait for more!
| laurynemily55 chapter 3 . 3/24/2010
Great work with this story! I love that Bella is a skater who has to decide what she really wants after her injury. I loved how Edward and Bella met and I can't wait for them to meet again! I really look forward to when she realizes that Alice is Edwards sister. I can see it is going to be a great moment :) I also hope there will be an EPOV coming up so we have some idea what he has been up to and what he is thinking in regards to Bella. Looking forward to the next update!
| mountainlion718 chapter 3 . 3/22/2010
aw...:( Renee is such a bitch. i really thought she was gonna see Edward...i wonder if he'll be looking for her
| mountainlion718 chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
ok, you have me hooked already!, Ice skating and hockey, 2 of my favs :D, great begining, i hope Bella will stop by Billy's to see him. can't wait for the next chapter!
| grrrr.edward chapter 3 . 3/22/2010
gr i just want them to meet!1 i fucking hate renee. that bitch.
| grrrr.edward chapter 2 . 3/22/2010
guh i am so hitched all ready love lvoe
| grrrr.edward chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
yum hockeyward! lvoe love!