|Reviews for Nevermore|
| Michiru Kita chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
A sinister laugh forced its way out of the the boy's mouth. "I am surprised that you have noticed. It is not like it matters anyway."
"What do you mean, herbivore?"
"The Cloud will no longer hide the Sky from the Mist."
At those words, fog enveloped Mukuro's new vessel and both the boy and the fog evaporated.
You wrote this part twice :)
Anyway: Good story but in the end... you could have made it like:
Hibari punchess the next wall with his tinfas (becuase he woul be angry right?) or even screamed in anger (even though this would be ... ooc XD but I think it would fit in there)
indeed this is your stry and I have no right to tell you to change it (well exept for the "you wrote it twice" part) so well... I think its good :)
| Rio 2.0 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Oh no! haha
Thats awesome. Kinda sad. Cute and D'oh at the same time.