|Reviews for Dark Golden Moons|
| Intense chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Intense. I couldn't stop reading. Dramatic, really, angsty, you're right. It was so good. I wouldn't mind you... adding another chapter? Yes? Maybe? No? Anyway. Good Job.
| teishamarie chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Christ on a crutch! That's one of the most amazing things I have ever read!
Gah, I'm speechless, seriously. Just wow.
| EveFidelius chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Wow, that was powerful. I really do love you detail, you seem to capture emotions so well. They become paint to an imaginary canvas in my mind. I am so happy you participated, I think next I am doing warm, I can't wait.
| Moon's Tear chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Hey there! It's venus_fiction from LJ - the one who's holding the challenge. :)
I love this piece! It's a very different take on traditional Bella/Carlisle fiction. The one-sidedness of it makes it feel that much more real and somehow plausible.
I love some of the emotional imagery you've used here - very vivid and moving. It's like the story comes off the pages and is pulling me in.
All in all, I love it! I can't wait to see more from you!