|Reviews for Chocolate|
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
| Laurie43 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
i love wally and hoagie's friendship fics!
all that time was wasted eventually by Tommy lol
you should do one for abby and kuki too, i reckon it will turn out good
| goodbye wonderland chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Wally and Hoagie friendship WIN!
These two are boyish cuteness personified, honestly.
I /love/ your friendship fics. This fandom has so much romance (no matter how well written) in it - it gets kind of boring and suffocating after awhile.
Your writing is awesome by the way. I totally wish I could write this well.
| paintslapped proclaimer chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I love this! :D
The only thing I can suggest is not adding the word "I" in the piece unless it's being said by a character; when you add it and it's NOT being said, it sounds out of place.
But, other than that, this is AMAZING. :D