Reviews for White
blueeyesandliterature chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
I'm not sure why, but this seemed sad to me. It was also sweet and beautiful and very well-written, but I can feel this undertone of sadness. I'm not sure if that was intentional or just how I'm reading it, but I loved everything about this story.
nessie chapter 1 . 2/28/2010


anonymouse chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Your writing style is awesome, but...I can't get over the fact that your Ken is kind of lame. He doesn't show much of the intelligence or determination that he has in the series. That said, this is a nice short that never veers on the edge of too much sentimentality, like so many other fics do. It's nice.