No! :( this is great right more now! Grrrrr! Please?

No! :( this is great right more now! Grrrrr! Please?

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Its good but really bad spelling.

have u heard of spellings?

That was pretty good please write some more please

i love this story its just like a funny pick me up you can read inbetween some of the other darker stuff or way 2 lemony stuff lol keep up the good work :Pxx

Ok im reviewing ok? This storey is awesome, hilarious, ... i better not give you too much praise since it makes your head to big and partly because i have run out of anymore words since i just woke up.

goodluck

rollerblading.

You need to write another Chapter that story was good so please write more

yay! you updated and listened to our amazing *cough cough* advice! The ending to this was really sweet, it made me go all fuzzy inside, and the Emmet parts...Lol.

On a more proffesional note (I feel like a frickin English teacher!), the layout was a lot easier to read, it looked and sounded better.

Well done!

And yes I would love more of these!

ok, two things;

1. sweet idea which made me laugh especially when emmet screams, they should do that in one of the movies,

2. you should really start a new line everytime someone speaks as it got a little confusing, and it hurt my eyes as i hads to squint to read the paragraph as its so long.

other than that great! hope you can write more!

He he he... funny!

Sup, This was your first story and it made me feel all fuzzy inside !

keep making more ! (:

danielle love youu ! 3