|Reviews for I Fall Only For You|
| KATY123 chapter 3 . 8/30/2012
wow this so freaken funny lol...hop u update soo, and is bella going to be prego?
| Rhianna chapter 3 . 3/29/2011
I have said this on too many of your storiess now so could you please ... UPDATE .. on all of themm , i miss reading them :( Please hurry :) xx
| ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 3 . 10/30/2010
i love it omg i really do i love u and plz plz plz plz keep writing bye
| oxo-ABANDONED-ACCOUNT-oxo chapter 3 . 10/26/2010
Kan du være så venlig at skrive det næste kapitel SNART?
I TOTALLY LOVE THIS!
Remember that, and write!
| CarlisleAndBella'sLove chapter 3 . 5/23/2010
I CANNOT BELIEVE THEY SLEPT WITH EACHOTHER !
I REALLY AM DYING TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE NEXT CHAPTER
ARE HIS SIBLINGS GONNA BE MAD ?
WILL TANYA GET JEALOUS ?
WILL THE SCHOOL MAKE RUMOURS SAYING IT'S UNTRUE IF THEY FIND OUT?
WILL THE SCHOOL MAKE FUN OF BELLA AND EDWARD WHE THE FIND OUT THE SLEPT TOGETHER ?
ANSWER THE QUESTIONS PLEASEEE ... IF YOU HAVE TIME TO !
CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY IT'S YOUR BEST EVER !
| CarlisleAndBella'sLove chapter 2 . 5/23/2010
i love the end part but if i was writing this story ( which i'm not) i would have had bella say something to tanya ... but it's all good :D
UPDATE SOON PLEASEEE DYING TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN /!
| CarlisleAndBella'sLove chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
aww i thought it was cute how he tripped up :)
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
| Fluffy Green Thing chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
OK some constructive criticism:
to see or acknowledge, notice someone is spelled NOTICE not notes
the Shakespeare saying is To be or not to be, that is the question, not to be and not to be, that is the question because that a) sounds stupid and b)doesn't even make sense :P
| Eebee Cullen chapter 5 . 4/5/2010
i love the story and i hope u will update soon! ]
p.s. i am 12 too!
| xx.Mrs.Jacob.Ephraim.Black.xx chapter 4 . 2/27/2010
Sorry - I didn't mean anything horrible by my reveiw and I didn't mean to offend you!
| cullencutie747 chapter 4 . 2/27/2010
i lov it.
i dont think u jumped into the romance to soon... its so perfect
| xx.Mrs.Jacob.Ephraim.Black.xx chapter 3 . 2/27/2010
There's loads of spelling mistakes! But other than that it's really good!
| SIGH chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Ok hunnie Im; this is just plain annoying aswell you made a spelling error.
Please take the time to look back at your work aswell as your profile to edit your spelling/grammer errors.
You are misspelling the simplest words at elm school level yet you can spell things correctly at middle school level.
No offense but it makes me sad to see this is what todays kids are like. you do not want to go into highschool spelling like this.. You could be very good at writeing, but without correct spelling and grammer its nothing.
| this is just plain annoying chapter 2 . 2/27/2010
you also put trough for threw and writhed for wrote, ruined for ran.
"I walked very fast over to him, but he didn't saw me"
The SAW should be see.
"toughed" should Be touched.
You can get mad all you want for people trying to help you LEARN how to spell correctly but we're are just trying to help you out.
With better spelling comes more reviews and readers.
| Ok this is just plain annoying chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Your grammer and spelling needs to be worked on.
Im sorry. Your misspelling words like people(peapol as you put it), down(dawn as you like to spell it), seat(you put set) and for(you also put fore) and Notice you put notes. Its pure elementry words you are misspelling.