Reviews for Glitter in the Air
Slade Burton chapter 13 . 6/9/2015
Ok. I think that you need to write more. I really need more.
Denise chapter 13 . 6/5/2015
What a wonderful story! If I were editing, the one thing I would do is reduce the number of references to tight pants, and being prodded in the thigh. Find a few more ways to mention that they were aroused. Other than that tiny thing, I think this is phenomenal. You've really captured the characters voices well.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/9/2015
This story is soooo good! Please carry on :D
EvePlays chapter 13 . 11/15/2014
This was a yet another amazing chapter! I can't believe how sweet this is! I read it all with joy and felt every emotion. As it says 'To be continued...' I thought that on the way back to Camelot, Arthur and Merlin get attacked by some robbers and that Merlin is forced to use his magic in Arthur's view. You can make up the rest ;)
feisty chapter 13 . 9/24/2014
Wow!it's really interesting... I can't wait to see the end...good job...
Ravon-marie22 chapter 13 . 9/9/2014
Are you planning on updating a new chapter? I want to see how arther and Merlin are together even when they're in Camelot and I just love this pairing. It's so adorable. :) Been trying to see if there were any stories with this pairing because I wanted to see how an ArtherxMerlin pairing will be like and thanks to you and your story, I have falling in love with that pairing. So romantic and cute at the same time.
OnceaSuperWhoLockian chapter 13 . 7/29/2014
I honestly wasn't sure about this story at first, nothing against you or the story really, just had my reservations. I am glad to say that I thoroughly enjoyed it! I love that you had all the adorable hemming and hawing at the beginning and I always love seeing jealous/protective/dominant Arthur ) Really great job! Now i'm off to start part 2!

sakura haruno chapter 13 . 6/28/2014
and a continued?
alex chapter 13 . 3/29/2014
that's awesome! i really do love your story..but when can i read the others part? )
can't wait to continue read )
Woowoo83 chapter 13 . 1/15/2014
I truely loved this story. The build up was brilliant and your writing style has good flow and direction. You kept Arthur and Merlin's TV personalities true and the transition of their relationship was very natural. I really hope you write a sequel! Will definitely be fav-ing and following your work xxxx
theforestgirl chapter 13 . 1/13/2014
Hi! I thought I'd live a review, I enjoyed the story - the way you slowly built up the intensity between them worked well, I don't usually read slash and I found their developing relationship very cute and yes, innocent :) and in character too. The strawberry moment was my fav!
unknown chapter 13 . 7/27/2013
it says complete but you didn't explain what Hunith said...
Alithe Cambre chapter 13 . 6/12/2013
Gar! How dare you end it this way!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/11/2013
Uhhhmaaazzziiiiinnnngggg... WHEN WILL YOU CONTINUE?!
Guest chapter 13 . 2/28/2013
When are you going to finish this story ? its brilliant !
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