Reviews for Rapture is just the Beginning
Monster King chapter 8 . 3/1
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 1/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 1/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 8 . 1/3
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Dragon Blaze-X chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
well written bro but the bioshok thing kinda leaves me binld here
Wolfone10 chapter 8 . 12/26/2014
Wow IF possible I hate this early sakura MORE then the one in canon (I didn't really think that was possible). Anyway, what would that make Naruto? "SANE"! If you try to help a "supposed" teammate even if they ATTACK you during a mission? You either leave them the fuck alone, or KILL them for insubordination! NOT keep TRYING to help, that's just stupid! This team is more of disaster waiting to happen then the canon one! You'd have to be blind/deaf and dumb to think team 7 wasn't going to end in disaster in canon, this one is worse! Skill sets that don't match don't really matter if the personalities mesh, however you can compliment each other's skills as much as (in)humanly possible but if there is no TRUST, then it won't matter even the slightest amount! (something they preach a lot in canon but DON'T practice). As for this story, Sasuke is about as trustworthy as a friend that owes you money or a debt, (which is slightly okay) but sakura I wouldn't trust again to even clean toilets alone, let alone EVER, EVER turn my back to her again if I were Naruto, I'd make the Hokage VERY VERY VERY FURIOUS with the pinkette. Maybe SUB her out with a female Sai and send her back to the academy as a janitor for a year or 7.
doubledamn chapter 3 . 11/7/2014
So wait. I just thought of something. Did the human access to the Summon Realm come about from Columbia (Bioshock Infinite)'s foray into the breaching the Dimensional Walls?
doubledamn chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
So the Aburame Clan kept the knowledge of body augmentation in order to retain their ability to house insects within one's body?
Toby860 chapter 3 . 8/6/2014
i don't understand one part. earlier tenten admitted that Naruto was 1 year older than her but in the next part she berated herself for her thoughts about her LITTLE brother. please fix one or the other
Guest chapter 8 . 4/8/2013
i think this is a good story can't wait for an update
Kittens Kat chapter 8 . 3/17/2013
A DELIGHTFUL STORY! MORE PLEASE!
Kittens Kat chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
several people think that the Fourth Hokage had risen from the grave, and had been on a shopping spree.

TOO FUNNY! LOL
Ten no kaitou chapter 8 . 2/28/2013
oh man such a cliffhanger! nice story bioshock is awesome and seeing naruto with plasmids makes this even better i wonder how he will get any other ones though
Dia Konran Uzumaki chapter 8 . 2/8/2013
Sweet story glad I found this.
Reishin Amara chapter 8 . 11/29/2012
omg this is a quality just wasps that act like shadowclones are open for good ...the fact your adding more later? as long as you dont throw in a gamebreaker you have a diverse and wellbalanced skillset forming.

ps...they can use them anywhere?so if naruto has flame power and gets captured,arms behing his back...he can pull off the rocket or even from the back of his shoulders really.
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