|Reviews for Unexpected|
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/18/2016
woah woah woah WHAT JUST HAPPENED IT WAS GOING SO WELL?!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
Yes you should continue it
| Aya2013 chapter 21 . 4/10/2014
GREAT STORY! THANKS
| janto4ever chapter 21 . 3/8/2013
Awww... That's so sweet especially the epilogue. I enjoyed this very much. So, thank you. And promise me you will keep writing.
| Narukin chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Very good story, I loved it so much that I finished it in less than a day :), and that barely happens. :3 Hope there is a sequel.
| Lady Emma Wentworth chapter 21 . 4/8/2011
Love this story! Jack & Ianto happy family stories are always my absolute favourites, equal to Ianto becoming immortal and being able to share Jack's eternity with him so he's not alone.
I like the way you put in conflicts, esp the bit with Owen. I actually felt badly for Owen, when I found out about Katie, and having the guys name their daughter after Katie was a really sweet tender move.
But the epilogue - rubbish! I understand the changes in staffing, although I'm kind of sorry that Owen & Tosh never made a go of it - I think Owen really missed out on something special there, and I was sorry about his leg. But the way Jack & Ianto's relationship deterioriated? Bah! If ever two men needed a kick in the arse, it's those two! An affair? Jack doesn't do affairs, he does one-night-meaningless-stands with nameless, faceless people. And being in love with Ianto, he doesn't do ethem at all! But I suppse, at least you put them back together in the end. That really is all that matters.
Now, when does Katie get a little brother?
| Francine S chapter 21 . 10/8/2010
aww, really sad its over and omg to jack, omg, my heart stopped when i realised what he had done, omg, glad that they are working at it but omg, poor ianto always having to put up with jack sleeping around but then having an affiar, thats just too far, poor katie too, being so used to her parents fighting, just shouldnt happen, do love the information on what the rest of the team has done, although sad about martha, glad that jack had the doctor to talk to, although totally understand ianto not liking him, glad that it all kinda worked out in the end, although really really wished things were better for them, and really sad that it is over, really enjoyed this story
| wandamarie chapter 21 . 10/8/2010
thank you it was a good one
| x - Torchwood's Baby Blue - x chapter 20 . 9/5/2010
THAT WAS SOOOOOO SWEET... i dont want it to end. you are an amazing writer...
| fantasylover42 chapter 20 . 9/3/2010
OH NOOOOOOOOOO I DON'T WANT IT TO END!
i love this story. It's one of my favorites that I'm reading. I'm so sad that soon it'll all be over :(
It's been fantastic, though.
| Francine S chapter 20 . 9/1/2010
aww, poor ianto at the start feeling so angry and guilty over what had happened, totally far though, love tosh helping him though, glad jack and ianto did talk about it, aww poor owen, do love the explination, really sad though, glad that he is back to normal though, omg to the name, aww too gorgeous, loved it, love owen being the godfather, love that it is kinda assumed that the doctor would look after katie without being the god father, although owen would totally be the same anyway but love that they did give him that, so sad that it is almost over, aww, loved this story so much
| SeverusPotterSnape chapter 20 . 9/1/2010
so sweet! you've actually updated! do more! You should do a sequel with the baby all grown up and working for Torchwood!
| wandamarie chapter 20 . 9/1/2010
thank you it was a good one keep up the great work hope you up date soon thanks
| PCJanto chapter 20 . 9/1/2010
This was so beautiful and heartwarming, So glad Jack and Ianto, gat a understanding of what was happen with Owen, and they not only remain friends,, but became much closer, thank to their daughter, wonderful story, and so well written
| JantoXD chapter 19 . 8/25/2010
i know its not a choice but maby Meghan? It means pearl