Ha ha ha haaaaa! Cry some more!

Love the Heavy reference. TF2 all the way D

You magnificent bastard. Having started my own foray into the world of writing fanfiction, it is only now, even after having been such a longtime fan of Interregnum, that the difficulty of writing a story like this truly entails, and I am astounded that even on my sixth or so read-through that your words are able to render me speechless. Truly I have no words, for I am but a mortal walking among the works of a god, and I am extremely thankful for the opportunity to have read your works.

Fucking Sidonis! I'm going to play Mass Effect 2 now just so I can watch Garrus drill him in the fucking head! On another note, BEAUTIFUL chapter. It actually made me shed tears and that's no mean feat. T_T

Very good thus far. Only the odd word seems out of character or a bad fit. Engaging. Hopefully the pace slows down at times to give time for character development and interaction outside of mission scenarios. I like the characters and the personality of Omega, the facts of life and quirks of it; makes it seem much more alive. Reminds me of Skullduggery Pleasant at times.

So I was just imagining everything that Garrus said or thought in Brandon Keener's voice. I think that says enough how you captured both Garrus' character and my interest and attention. The descriptions are vivid, violent, and exciting. The setting is very much like the shady establishments I'd imagine Omega to have, even if the game gave us a limited area to explore.

I look forward to reading and reviewing the many chapters ahead!

Splendid. You have my gratitude for writing this story.

I grew attached to Garrus' crew, despite knowing what was coming. Archangel fought against the impossible, and I salute them for it.

This chapter is a great summary of why I think Garrus is a wonderful character. He knows what he is trying to do is impossible... but he will still try.

The three main criminal organizations, ignoring Aria, are planning on fighting Archangel. Sidonis has been identified...

Another new member... with the story nearing its end, I fear I won't get to see a lot of him.

Obviously, this story will not end with Garrus permanently changing Omega. I am truly in lpve with this story, so don't mistake that for a complaint. This chapter jus made me realize tha I've never seen a story where Archangel created an Omega with a bright future. I wouldn't mind reading something like that.

Vortash... what's your goal?

And Melenis' secret is finally revealed. I liked seeing what everyone is doing on their downtime.

Ah, if only Mordin hadn't walked away before Erash made his offer. That would have made some interesting consequences.

A krogan who hates the krogan race. Unexpected. I wonder if he will join Archangel.