Reviews for The Last Summer
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Great story
IAmDifferentLiveWithIt chapter 5 . 8/17/2011
I like idea that you've got for the story but the way you wrote it is just so confusing and it doesn't make it any easier for the reader...
Kpfan72491 chapter 5 . 8/14/2011
Amazing chapter :)
vyctoria chapter 4 . 5/14/2011
Hey i was just reading this and i have to say that I wish that you would keep writing this story was (still is) good
thefbm chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
She didn't want to be left behind, but she didn't want to leave them behind either.

I'm captivated by that line, being stuck in my head, and the scene itself too.

I like the aspect of the diary, wouldn't allow some insight from Carly. Plus, many writers leave her out. Carly isn't left on the side; she'll effect the two.

I really like the flashback, time it takes to piece together, enjoyable for me at least.

I must say I'm very eager to Sam's decision-attending SB-and that unanswered response from her. Great writing, I'm excited for the next chapter.
Lanter chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
"I don't know what scares me more- the idea of them getting together or the idea of something happening and them breaking up."

Carly made some valid points here without coming off as a jealous harpy.
jamie chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
This story is very well written. I like it a lot so far. Please, continue the good work. )
everythingthatsparkles12 chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
you just had to give a preview of the next chapter! Make me want it ever more, haha. Update soon!
Kpfan72491 chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
Great chap
this little heart of mine chapter 3 . 7/23/2010
I think this story is insanely going to be awesome! Update soon though I've been waiting for that:))
Broccoli-xxxx chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
Love love love it. Please write more, this has a real mystery feel to it.
Randomgirl chapter 3 . 5/18/2010
I loved your story. I was wondering if Freddie felt butterflies or not. Update. This is really nice please update I looved it
MidniteLayce chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
Great chapter. Had a sad tinge to it, with Sam and Freddie so distant and Carly trying futilely to make thing like they were before. I'm off to read more!

~ MidniteLayce19
MidniteLayce chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Interesting so far. Having an older version of the trio stuck together all summer at a beach house seems like the perfect recipe for disaster. ;) Carly, Sam, and Freddie were quite in character, and I'm excited to read more. :)

~ MidniteLayce19
Lanter chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
Griffin catching on to Freddie's jealousy over Sam would be an interesting way for the show to go.
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