|Reviews for Haunted|
| Anon chapter 5 . 4/3
Inuyasha is being proactive finally.
| Anon chapter 4 . 4/3
What kind of friend doesn't hear I am not going to marry you and I see you as a brother? She was saying it for several years.
Instead of getting help, he drives off to his doom and others' doom. It is the same as drunk driving. Thankfully other weren't harmed.
His getting in his car and driving away. Kagome couldn't have stopped him. He is stubborn. She knows this. She have been telling him for several years how she feels about him, and he never listened to Kagome.
Instead of moving on, he becomes obsessed with Kagome. He doesn't love her. Kagome isn't object. She is still saying the way thing. He is her platonic friend. And as a dead person, he should be her friend and hear what she is saying.
| Anon chapter 3 . 4/3
Kichiro is an ass. Kagome told him plenty of times they weren't in love, they weren't getting married in the future, and she loves him like a brother. What kind of friend doesn't hear those words? He allows a one sided crush to go overboard.
| Jay chapter 31 . 8/1/2016
Perfect ending to a great story. Took awhile to get through it, but I'm glad I did.
| Jay chapter 30 . 8/1/2016
"thanks to my sons" apostrophe.
"his enemies hands." Apostrophe.
I really enjoyed the darker side of Kagome taking pleasure in purifying him bit by bit. I was slightly worried her enjoyment may taint the jewel a bit, but he deserved it. This was a great chapter. She just added two people to the clan though when she goes to be presented.
| Jay chapter 29 . 7/31/2016
It's quickly coming to an end, but it's getting really good. Glad we didn't have to wait another chapter for the battle to start. I love watching Naraku lose.
| Jay chapter 28 . 7/31/2016
I loved this chapter! Can't wait to see Izayoi's & Kagome's plan in action.
| Jay chapter 27 . 7/31/2016
"want to hink about" Think.
" forward." Let's " Placement of the quotation mark.
Good chapter. Looking forward to seeing what Kagome realized.
| Jay chapter 26 . 7/31/2016
I liked this chapter & I'm glad her mama pointed out that she should live long enough to see them again. I've read plenty of stories where they're scared of the well closing, but nobody ever mentions that & it's frustratingly obvious. I almost hope they can find a way to stop Naraku from getting his father in the first place now that they know his plans. If he were to be alive again after the shards were removed, how would that work with his life bond?
| Jay chapter 25 . 7/30/2016
That was a very sweet ending.
| Jay chapter 24 . 7/30/2016
To be honest, it felt like this was mostly a filler chapter. It was still good though.
| Jay chapter 23 . 7/30/2016
Kinda looking forward to a fight between the boys & their father. I'm trying to figure out your motive behind having Sango sick for so long.
| Jay chapter 22 . 7/30/2016
I think this chapter was one of my favorites. It had a little humor, it had sadness, & it had a little shock value. I was surprised how quickly Inu realized his mistake about stopping Kagome when Sess called him on it. Great chapter!
| Jay chapter 21 . 7/29/2016
This was a good chapter. I think you did fine with their beliefs. I've seen the wheel of life several times over the years & I like that you mentioned it in yours.
| Jay chapter 20 . 7/29/2016
After she sent Kichiro on, I was waiting for her to collapse in exhaustion. Really wonderful chapter!