Reviews for Leaving Absence
doyoumakepizza chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
I just found this, and I don't think there are enough reviews for how beautiful this is. I loved it.
pirate-princess1 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
AW! This is...sad, but is very well written.
chossytoss chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I just found this, but I like it. Simple and clear, yet poetic at the same time! Well done!
kanskyny chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
: great
Cricket Songs chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
This is such a beautiful little oneshot. I think you captured each of the characters nicely, and your style is so light (as in airy? If that makes any kind of sense - it's in the syntax, maybe) and insightful.

I especially liked,

"She thinks, Something is missing.

She stretches her arms out and twists her back, feels the pull on her skin, the pain jut up her spine.

Never mind."

And the bit about what McGee wrote in his book.

Thank you for the wonderful story!

- Cricket
reader chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Nicely done. I thought it was interesting and well-written.