Reviews for Without you
unstablemolecule chapter 11 . 9/24/2010
great story and i love this second ending.. :)
Terms2k1 chapter 11 . 4/8/2010
lol i liked the first ending better. cuz the second one was like.

HAHAHAHAHA IT'S A CRUEL FAKE!
Midnight Sun-n-Ivory Moon chapter 11 . 3/15/2010
Great Story!
xwhitemoonx chapter 11 . 3/13/2010
hehe

so hilarious
kicyslawa chapter 11 . 3/9/2010
Haha! That was your best chapter I think D

I love it! Beginning was quite romantic and rest was totally like Rukia, what makes it better! D Besides, I had some good time reading your story ;)
kicyslawa chapter 10 . 3/9/2010
This chapter was a good one. yup a little tragedy, but than orichime came and.. However... Uh... I kinda didn't feel it... Gonna check ending nr II :)
Aizawa Li Syaoran Vessalius chapter 11 . 3/8/2010
owh...cool..

i like the end...

please..make the sequel...

about ichigo & rukia lives when they be couple...
omaomae chapter 11 . 3/8/2010
ICHI SO EVIL! but hes gonna get it :D he always does...update soon please!
xwhitemoonx chapter 9 . 3/6/2010
aw

i feel like crying...

so sad

but very awesome
Aizawa Li Syaoran Vessalius chapter 9 . 3/6/2010
OMG...

hiks hiks...

yosei!

i hate u!

i think you're nice student!

please, don't make Ichigo die!
omaomae chapter 9 . 3/5/2010
...sighs...nice chapter...kinda sad ya but not really...u mentiond no 1 dying so ya...update soon please!
kicyslawa chapter 9 . 3/5/2010
I'm kind confused 'bout this chapter...

Your idea was good, but you wanted to do it too fast. :/ Suddenly Yōsei was evil and was incredibly strong. Than, she tried to kill Rukia, next Ichigo defenced her with his own body, but I think that he relised his bankai and that was nothing was a little too much. If you wanted to get him into state nearly-dead you should do that in a great fight. Think, what was when he was fighting with Byakuya and Renji, when they came to ger Rukia to SS?

I just think that you hurt him a little, makig him to get hurt so badly so fast :/

However, there was also something that I really like in this chapter The way how Rukia was talking 'bout Ichi was great, I couldn't help but smile then :) And when he kissed Rukia... Cute D

Well... I think you can do better ;] so show what you can do ;)

So... This is it, wanna next chapter! ;D
tilldeathdouspart789 chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Yeah, sorry guys who have read this chapter twice! I uploaded the wrong chapter for chapter 7! I felt so stupid last night, realising it! I am so sorry! *~*
omaomae chapter 8 . 3/4/2010
...uhh...was there a prob or sumthin...cuz this chapter was the exact same as the last 1...
anomunis chapter 8 . 3/4/2010
Wow. This story is awsome. I can't wait for more. Pleas eright more.
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