|Reviews for A Special Kind Of Mission|
| marloes84 chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
I loved reading your story a special kind of mission. It had a surprising turning which I didn't see coming. The fact that Marie has died years prior to the story you're writing. I thought she died more recently and the mansion would be in mourning when Jake arrived/the History lesson started. I'll hope you catch my drift of what I'm meaning to say but have trouble writing down.
I take it Jubilee is the only orignal living X-men left next to Logan.
Nice touch of giving Logan some grey hairs. Although I was disappointent when it turned out Logan and Marie had no kids but hey thats my point of view and personal preference in this ship.
I don't know if you're writing a prequel to this story. Maybe how did the war end or hoe did Jubilee end up in a weelchair or what did happen to the other members of the X-men, something like that. Maybe even a sequel in which Jake becomes an X-men or him pulling a prank.
I rather like Jake. I don't know his power (maybe I read over it) but with what you did wrote about him - how Mr. Collins treated him gave me a good enough image of him. I also don't recall the fact that you described his looks/exterior. So well done on that, you've given me an image on an original character without letting me know much about the character in the first place.
I hope you get the drift of my review because English isn't my first language I have sometimes trouble writing it down in the right words.
| Auua Ytjoml chapter 5 . 3/6/2010
This is really sweet.
sugury sweet and awesome sweet.
Did Logan and Marie ever have any kids?
| KravenV chapter 5 . 3/4/2010
this fic was really good! I really like it so fare! so does Logan still look the same or does he look a little older? I cant wait to see what will happen next, Very excited to see where this is gonna go! please, please continue!
| CaptMacKenzie chapter 2 . 3/1/2010
well, your style leaves much to be desired, and you definitely NEED a beta reader, but I love Jubie's reminiscing. Jake's dread over Wolvie & contempt for Jubes (which will doubtless fade as he gets to know the old Xmen) is pretty entertaining. THe premise is unique, and has a great potential. I hope Jubes' story is worth the wait.