|Reviews for Coming Home|
| Kisaki Sakura chapter 34 . 8/11/2015
You bitch! You had me weeping for three chapters straight and than tearyeyed till the end.
How could you do such a thing to Dean and Harry... and to little Cas.
My poor boys. I'm just so glad that it turned out all right in the end. Maybe we are up to a following storie abou Cas and Scorp.
I like your writing, your plot while being heartwrenching was downright evil nonethess an amazing idea and well "plotted".
Thank you for writing this story, and please take the cuss at the beginning of this review as a statment of my emotions skyrocking instead of the literal meaning.
| atalanta chapter 11 . 6/5/2015
I think I'm in love with your writing...
| dhh chapter 35 . 12/7/2013
I just have ONE thing to say, Teddy is pretty vindictive and CRUEL to say what he said about Harry; whom is MAKING HIM 'Lord Black' when it should go to Castiel, both titles actually, since HARRY actually HAS a kid to inherit it!
| dhh chapter 4 . 12/7/2013
If you just had Mpreg then the titles would GO to his CHILDREN and NOT Teddy Lupin OR the damn weasley!
| joaly999 chapter 35 . 9/3/2013
I loved Mac's bar, I really did, and it's probably one of my favourite stories here on ffnet.
However, I just find this so depressing and angsty! I get no joy in reading this, unlike Mac's bar, which just made me smile.
I don't like your portrayal of Harry, who seems slightly mad, and although I understand why you've portrayed him that way, I still think alot of its unnecessary. When he stormed in to Bobbys I think it was justified. He reacted like any parent would to their child being kidnapped, since as a minor he was kidnapped, and is portrayed as a mad man. What the hell did they expect? They kept his son in secret for a week, then when he freaks out, treat him like dirt.
I am just so disappointed! Please don't take this as a flame because I absolutely adore your writing (most of the time) and this is very well written, I just loathe the plot and portrayal of characters. I genuinely feel that one of the genres for this should be angst, because I really do feel like that when reading this. It's just so frustrating!
There's much more that I disagree with in this fic that I'm not going to rant about, I'm sorry to say I just categorically did not enjoy this sequel in case you hadn't guessed.
Now I'm just going to pretend it never happened and continue to hold MB in high regards. Although if you want to reply feel free...although you probably hate me right now :(
| eva9673would log in but i'm too lazy chapter 35 . 2/15/2012
i shouldn't have read this. I cried my eyes out :')
| NULL chapter 18 . 2/12/2012
Cool fic! but I have one question: Is boy!Castiel Fallen!Castiel reborn as a kid, or an OC with the same name? I know Angel!Cas does show up in the fic, but Supernatural *does* have canon Time Travel via Castiel & the other Angels. (& it could make the boy more powerful if he had/gets access to Angelic Grace.) (& if he Fell for Dean, that could make Harry's interactions with his son pretty angsty, if anyone finds out:)
| delete-account-please 742011 chapter 35 . 9/23/2011
this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account.
| Flukemeister chapter 31 . 2/17/2011
Like this story, but there's still one thing that pisses me off at this chapter. Sam should have gotten his proverbial slap in the face as well for assuming like an ass. Sure Dean may have suffered for being away from Harry, but it was time away that was needed, badly. Imagine you just found out you had a kid who hated you but loved your lover. The longer his lover stayed, the further away Harry would get from ever getting a chance at being a father to his own kid. If Dean stayed, the kid would have gotten even more attached to him and want even less to try and attach to Harry. Dean leaving for a few years was what was needed. And Sam acting like it was all on Harry, all Harry's fault because he 'made Dean that way' is bullshit. I say Harry shouldn't have been the only one to be bashed on, Sam should have gotten his fair share of being yelled at and accused as well. Serves him fucking right.
| thebestestfriendsforever chapter 35 . 2/13/2011
sounds cant' wait to see what is going on.
| MissiYoung chapter 34 . 2/2/2011
...so wanna hate sam...
...so wanna put harry in therapy...
...so wanna do so much...
...your characters so completely rock...
love this fic!
| Lientjuhh chapter 34 . 1/29/2011
I liked it.. Well done.. :) Up to the sequel.. :)
| spk chapter 34 . 11/14/2010
Just discovered these 2 stories. Really enjoyed them. My heart kind of broke for Harry, Dean, & Cas when Dean left. Loved the ending. :)
| diesedame chapter 31 . 10/2/2010
awww man. i really loved the story "In Mac's bar..." but i sort of dislike the sequel. It portrays harry to be selfish and sorta nuts...
| Bamfderson chapter 34 . 7/14/2010
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS STORY :D