Reviews for Beyond the Pale
Spottedmask12 chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
Awesome story! Please update soon!
sea-kingdom chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
i absolutely love this
i love harry's apathy, and how lily and james are portrayed as people who made mistakes, rather than heartless monsters who suddenly saw light of day
i will definitely check out your other stories
oh, and i love the way harry deals with the boggart
sea-kingdom chapter 2 . 4/14/2014
second year
oh my god.
i never thought of it like that before, but it just- it makes so much sense
i- i just- i don't know what to say, i suddenly hate lockhart with every single fibre of my very being
rnarayananlovesharrypotter chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
that's no excuse for not finishing such a lovely story
Kenskirae chapter 4 . 4/12/2014
I know you said at the end of this story that you don't like it but I find it very nicely written, if a bit rushed during the last chapter. I actually forgot I was reading a mailing list when I started reading this story as a recommended fic from that list. I do hope you complete it. I think you've done a good job with Harry and the rest of your characters. I would like to see what happens in years 5, 6, and 7.
HitomiFeito chapter 2 . 4/10/2014
WAHHH! This made me cry( nrly) the part with Lockheart and Harry was so terrible I felt a shiver go down my spine! I hate child abuse hate it despise it! It's so HORRIBLE! I never ever liked Lockheart!

Still love ur story though... Even if Harry's apathetic everyone who reads this story feels intense emotion. Your wonderful xxx
rowan.catara chapter 4 . 4/7/2014
I figure write what you like, and stuff anyone else, mate. If people like it, good. If people don't, then stuff them too. :-)
MADStar529 chapter 4 . 4/1/2014
Another one I love!
XxAceLawxX chapter 4 . 3/28/2014
was that diary-tom-riddle?
Ibskib chapter 4 . 3/24/2014
I is rare to see an apathetic Harry, it is something that appeals to me considering his more cerebral approach.
SilverFlameoftheWindScar chapter 4 . 3/22/2014
I hope this doesn't burn your buttons, but I do like this fic (I like Slash, too, lol), and I could probably give you a good reason as to why it caters to a larger audience: it's not overbearingly detailed!

There's plenty of tidbits to get by, you explain the things that -need- to be explained, and you leave enough to keep readers guessing. I was reading a story earlier that I had to quit or I would have most likely barfed - it had between a whole page to a page and a half devoted to nothing more than making a freaking broomstick.

Believe it or not, I write most...well, hmm, actually ALL of my stories by the seat of my pants! I don't plan anything and usually have to go back and re-read them (not that I mind, I wouldn't post them if I didn't like them, right?) just to refresh myself on what I've put in them! LOL!

I don't blame you for feeling a bit intimidated when a story gets popular, but it wouldn't be good enough and entertain people if it -wasn't- popular! :D
SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
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demonlight6767 chapter 4 . 3/14/2014
I love it! Please update!
The Dark One Rising chapter 2 . 3/6/2014
Why Luna? Why did it have to be Luna?
herart chapter 4 . 2/26/2014
An interesting reading, yet different. A more damaged and abused version of Harry, who albeit is not dark, bad things happened to him. The end, tought it's abruptly finished.

The author's note at the end is good to understand the 'why' of this story. There's no pairing here, or at least is more with Megan than Hermione.
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