|Reviews for Beyond the Pale|
| Youko's Befuddled Fox chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
I'm a fairly unbiased reader and have liked/loved your work that I have read. You're widespread enough in the categories that the right people should find it, but it can take time. Though looking at your profile and how old your account is you may already be past some of things you mention in your a/n. Sorry _;
| Knowledge is a powerful tool chapter 4 . 9/6/2013
Hm. Hm, indeed. I rather liked this, actually, it was an interesting idea - and I like your writing style. Nicely done.
| SleepyMangaHead chapter 4 . 9/5/2013
Holy crap! We finally figure out what happened to diary-Riddle. He does seem the type to kill a part of him he views as crazy and obsolete. I wonder what young-Tom thinks of Charlus and Harry.
| wolfzmasterz chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Really like the story. Going to look now to see some of your other work.
| Witch Priestess chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
I'm guessing the teen outside the Manor in the graveyard is the Tom Riddle from the diary fueled by Ginny Weasley's life
| HP.HG. fan forever chapter 3 . 8/24/2013
About canon Harry not having sheilds at age sixteen, are you sure? Harry may have had them because of they way he was raised, just as your Harry does even if not as strong. Snape didn't like Harry and took every oppurtunity to make his life hell. He never explained how to defend himself, just 'clear your mind'. Is that any way to teach?
Even in canon it seemed that Flitwick had a hands off approach otherwise Luna wouldn't have had her belongings stolen every year.
Do you plan to continue this story?
| Katan-kun chapter 4 . 8/23/2013
Please don't worry. This is definitely good enough. This is a Harry Potter that I have so far never seen before. Every time I read a story where Harry has a brother, the parents, if alive, hate and willingly neglect Harry, or abandon, or ignore him. I like how this story is different in so many ways. I think I really like your style. Now, I found this peace of art kind of by accident, but it makes me want to read your other stories. If you're more enthusiastic about the others, I can only imagine how good those must be Also, we share a bloodtyp. Well, I put this stories in my favorites and alerts and stuff. Write on :)
| enbuscadenuncajamas chapter 4 . 8/16/2013
I think that's the best way ive seen the Graveyard dealt with EVER... hope to see more of this!
| Jmg94 chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
good story I don't recall reading that many stories with harry being unresponsive and cold I like it good work
| Ariz0na-Sky chapter 4 . 7/16/2013
| Triple Rainbow chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
I love the corset scene the best. It made me laugh for 5 minutes straight and then my friends were very confused.
| PuckForPresident chapter 4 . 7/5/2013
For what it's worth, I think you did capture the emotion behind the story's concept. You've got a very accurate idea of how Harry would turn out, especially the possessive protectiveness he feels toward his close friends. I haven't read your other stories (yet! Three guess about whose stories I'm going to read next and the first two don't count.) but you hit this one spot on.
| BookWormQween chapter 4 . 7/4/2013
I like it. Asdfghjkl
| ocha chapter 4 . 7/3/2013
hi um I like your story a lot but there's one problem I see with it is that is that um with Dumbledore passing that law how would have that kind of power because um with all the people who are trying to get out of higwarts most of the students parents are on the council they shouldn't be able to do that I can understand if Dumbledore was Harry's magical Guardian and he had like half the votes from that but other than that you wouldn't be able to pass this law
| Swallow-Tailed Kite chapter 4 . 6/28/2013
I think you got into Harry's head just right, actually, (and it's been two years, so pleaaaaase? /insert hopeful smile/) and there'll always be someone out there who love this (if everyone else left that'll be me, then.. remember IF, because seriously, who wants to ditch this? o.o) and it's really quite awesome the way you're kinda portraying Harry like a rock warming up. Reminds me of Wall-e. Hmm.