Reviews for Beyond the Pale
pinklatent chapter 4 . 7/8/2016
I love how you did Harry's character development,from being completely apathetic and uncaring to developing attachments and eventually learning to care for the people who also care for him, but still being apathetic to people outside of his circle. And I do love how you portrayed Lily and James, who were just trying their best to protect their children, not knowing the cost of it. Charlus is an interesting character, too, in how he scrambles to fulfill his "duty" to save people, try to be a big brother to an estranged apathetic kid, and also still have personality shining through. It's refreshing to read a wrong-boy-who-lived fic that didn't demonize the Potters, or the Weasleys for that matter.
GotNoName123 chapter 2 . 7/4/2016
Fuck! You killed Ginny! Never would've guest something like this! You are certainly a genius in writing the unpredictable
GotNoName123 chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
I just love how different this story seems! Other stories where Harry (or any other child related to the boy-who-lived) who got abandoned for their brother usually knew their parents were alive and all and normally held hate towards them and refused to save the world while being controlled by the hands of dumble or return to his parents kind of thing, but this was different and completely interesting change of events especially the moment his uncle actually showed somewhat care towards him and the entire rule thing reminds me of zombie land where the rules come with experience so this story is completely awesome and creative and new
Simsillian Potter chapter 4 . 6/23/2016
Will there be another chapter to this story?
ThaleiaEuphrosyneEveningshade chapter 4 . 6/22/2016
Kyuubi's Death chapter 4 . 6/8/2016
Um Neville's parents were not attacked because Death Eaters wanted information, it was revenge. Neville's father used a curse on Bellatrix that killed her unborn baby and made it so she couldn't have another kid. Then he said that someone like her doesn't deserve to have a baby. That's the main reason they had been attacked and why Bellatrix is insane.
Rafaxadrez chapter 4 . 6/5/2016
Very good
Rafaxadrez chapter 2 . 6/3/2016
Very good
juniper294 chapter 4 . 6/1/2016
Just read this story. I really enjoyed reading from harry's altered headspace. thats my favorite part of the fic. thank you for sharing.
kingthe13 chapter 2 . 6/1/2016
So voldy back then Also why do so many people kill her off...atleast she didn't end up in that horrible prison like in one fanfictions I read
kingthe13 chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
I feel bad for Fawkes the others can go fuck themselves.
n3000 chapter 4 . 5/31/2016
es bueno, por favor continua
Noremac Samoht Doowreshi chapter 4 . 5/28/2016
Well my advice is to write what you find amusing and tell people who dislike toug it's my story and I'll do what I want
sharingankakashi007 chapter 4 . 5/26/2016
Hmm I have read your other stories and liked them very much.
Do not worry about it this story is more popular because the theme is interesting.
And it doesn't mean that all your other stories are bad.
Don't worry about disappointing people...
Like they say in one piece, people who have no doubts are stronger... In this case great writers.
Soo relax and do what you want..
Devil.Harry chapter 4 . 5/26/2016
a very very good story. I hope to see more of it. thanks.
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