Reviews for Beyond the Pale
Marikili68 chapter 2 . 4/27/2010
i love your story please update soon!
hereandgone chapter 2 . 4/26/2010
I love this.

And yeah, Lockhart has always kind of struck me as... creepy...

Can't wait till third year.

ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 2 . 4/26/2010
Rather dark but a good read. Thanks for sharing!
Kira Kyuu chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
. . . Interesting. . . You planning on continuing?
FallenHope-Angel chapter 2 . 4/20/2010
wow poor harry but i do find t his interesting and i can't wait for you to update it. so do so soon please.
Kyuubi no Goddess chapter 2 . 4/20/2010
I know it sounds cruel, but I hope he never forgives them and he stays with him not seeing himself as part of their family. Anyways like it and hope for more.

kyuu out!
Katara97 chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
Great Job! Your portrayal of the characters is spot on!

Can't wait for the next update...
polyxenax chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
Holy crap, this is good. I've read so many stories where Harry is all emo and cut-cut-cut-the-world-hates-me, but this is quite unique. You have a very addictive style of writing. I can't wait for Year three! Great job and good luck. XD
Beeme-Bob chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
this is a great fic- i love apathetic harry,

i really hope u continue it- it would be a real shame

plz dont let it turn into 1 of those could-have-been fic If Only they updated
Annabella Loss chapter 2 . 4/17/2010
That's a great story. Please continue soon...
JDL45 chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
I like this. This is really surprisingly good for what seemed (at first) like a rather tired convention. Good-oh!
snogwomp chapter 2 . 4/14/2010
This is a really good representation of a completely apathetic character. Most would think it would be easy to write about a person with no emotions, however, that is not the case. Just because they don't show emotion, doesn't mean they don't have any. Your story is a wonderful presentaion of an apathetic Harry Potter. You give him a wonderful shell, and hide away his emotions. There is just enough emotion showing for us to respond to him. The way you make the simple things everyone understands a mystery to Harry only enhances the story and Harry's development as a character. The possessive traits that are starting to show up in Harry are a wonderful way to show that he is growing up, and is beginning to understand the way people think, and how the world works.

Not to mention the way you add a sprinkle of ngst into your story, just enough to make the reader anxious, but not enough to turn the reader away from you story. I also appreciate the way you use other characters and their experiences to bring out flavour within the story. The way the supporting characters draw your attention to the main character is a way of writing the story that only a few authors ever achieve.

Please do not give up on this story. It is wonderful, and i would really like to see it continue.
Thyrokio chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Nice work, I like this ''Who cares'' Harry.
LitCandle chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
When I saw how many people had reviewed this story with only 2 chapters I couldn't understand why, but now I do. This chapter 2 was a very significant and touching part of the story. I am not one for reviewing stories even when I love them but I had to with this one. This story is well written and I feel very connected to it. I can only hope that you will continue. Thank you for your time.
GlassObscurity chapter 2 . 4/11/2010
Oh, hey this ain't bad!
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