Well I can't say it;s truly comedy upon first reading but the anticipation generated a nontrivial laugh when reminded of the result the missive the "if she's got a sister " produces
Thanks

Well crafted, entertaining story. It was a little more angsty than my usual fare, however definitely worth reading. Great pairings, both the unexpected and those involving original characters. Nice touch using italics to explain inner thoughts during conversations.

Mostly serious business throughout, but I tipped my head back and laughed at Darcy's very short letter to Richard right after he met Elizabeth. Concise and perfect. Also, Bradley's wisdom and faith was inspirational. Excellent work. I loved it!

LOVED every minute of this story!

I love thisyou’ve swapped everything around, and still left all the pieces in playWell done and thank you

This is probably the best pride and prejudice variation that I've ever read.
Thank you for the effect that you put into it and for sharing.

I just want you to know that I'm in love with your Bingley. Now what do I do? xD

Lovely story.

Mr Bennet let an interrupted rapist stay under his roof because HIS comfort and safety is more important than the daughter Collins tried to rape? That is the most anti-Christian thing I have read today.

"Reap what ye sow."

A great story. Thank you for sharing.

I have to say, that this letter to Richard is so unlike Mr. Darcy usual correspondence that letter is my favorite line so far. I think it's hilarious! "come quickly. she has 3 sisters". I am enjoying this story immensely!

...it's ungentlemanly to turn out a man who tried to rape his daughter?

awwwwwwwww

I love the story so far. Just finished chapter 28, and that final line where Darcy writes to Richard 'Come quickly. She has three sisters' is probably my favorite line ever! Okay, back to reading!

Wow what an awesome story. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I like very much how you twist the original story. ️