Mr Bennett is a fool to think that sending his least sensible daughter away with poor supervision is a good idea. What a dunce!

OMG! These men are having such deep and thoughtful discussions about life and how best to live it. I feel “churched” on each page.

The 'Guest" comment or is full of shit! What a f.. ING coward hiding in the reviews behind a Guest... Middle finger to you bro!

The last 2 pages were such rushed jobs that it was an insult to the flow of this story. The last page and the pathetic attempt to write a mystery with the woman was utterly ridiculous. So your end didn't do justice to this story.

Both Mr and Mrs Bennet are full of shite. Since when does an entail holder determine the improvements on an estate with the current occupant still in residence! That was a silly excuse to justify the indolent negligent actions of Mr Bennet. And Mrs Bennet remains a nervous harpy.
It's best that most of the daughters will settle away from Hertfordshire

Now that the vicar has been hanging around Hertfordshire for several weeks and playing matchmaker while enjoying the easy carefree life, who's looking after his parish in Derbyshire

Elizabeth is a stupid as established early on in this story. Even her sisters Jane, Mary and Kitty are sensible and know what they want in their love life. It's time Georgiana and Ms Lackey come to Netherfield rather than allow Darcy to waste his time on an ungrateful arrogant wench Elizabeth

This story gets worse like the other nonsense you write

The asshole Colonel is gossiping about Darcy and Elizabeth behind their backs

Bennet bitch instead of fawning over his daughter should kick out Collins immediately.

Prostitute Lizzy couldn't even use the books herself against Collins

Just ridiculous that stinky Collins remains at Longbourn while the indolent Bennet is hiding in his bookroom

Charles is an asshole who publicly chastises his friend Darcy yet cannot stand up to his bitch sister. Even the curate is tagging along, what a joke.

Ass should have called Mary in too. Bennet is such a failure, making excuses for not involving his wife who as a social creature could have gotten involved with the tenants at least

The loving aunt MG letter was such a joke, basically maintaining the status quo and condoning the behaviour of her parents through the excuses given. Don't really think anything of this selfish Elizabeth because she is exactly like her proud asshole father. Mary has more sense and sensibilities than Elizabeth, Kitty is definitely talented, even insipid Jane wants to learn from Hill.
Darcy cares a lot about the tenants yet Elizabeth and her parents do fuck all.