|Reviews for A Vacation of Love|
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/20
Great Story! XD
| AmberUchciha chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
| Quirino chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
I'll just make this review short and snappy.
I enjoyed the story. It was very adorable. They make such a cute couple. I had to smile at the necklace scene and the river scene.
I loved the Pikachu's Ketchup pun (you might have written how surprised the waiter looked when he served ice cream with ketchup, but that's just a minor thing).
One thing I missed was at the final scene you could have written something more about their body lanuage, how they felt uneasy and started blushing: also Dawn had to feel what the conversation was leading to, right? But I'm just being overly critical right now...
But all in all it's a good story and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work! I really enjoy your stories.
PS: I have one more thing (sorry): It's called Sunyshore city, not Sunny Shore City.
| JohnP87 chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
i love this you really outdid yourself on this
| PocketMonstersFan chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
AWWW SOOO KAWAII :33333333333
| PocketMonstersFan chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
dang im getting tired of typing in a username XD
anyways i loved this idea :) it's so creative
oh that dream was scary...
| X-InferNova-X chapter 2 . 7/17/2010
Awwwww... X3 so cuuuuuuute!
Although this story had a very cliché storyline, you wrote it in such an adorable wayyyy! :3 I can't help it - I'm faving. XDDD
- Dammie D
| Angel Rei Ayanami chapter 2 . 6/7/2010
This is amazing. Great work on the story. Keep up the amazing work. My friend.
| HUGE pokefan chapter 2 . 5/20/2010
CUUUTE! OMG! SO CUTE! You should do a sequel! Awesome story!
| Pesky.Bluee chapter 2 . 5/9/2010
Aww that was so cute! Freaking pikachu... lol. I loved this story! *favorites* There. TOTALLY CUTE!
| Pesky.Bluee chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Aww that was so cute! XD I loved the necklace part... :) The ending freaked me out a bit, but hey! Really good ending of the chapter if you want the readers to go to the next xhapter!
| AyCarayChicolion chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
awsome story sis!:]
| AshKetchumDarkSide chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
love it hey check out rising darkness
| This accound is over chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
you should work a little on dialogs, so they represent what you write that they do, but apart from that...thsi story was pretty cool! awesome, if you ned anything, dont doubt PM me
| xEryChan chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Alright Twinnie, before i start, I'm using my iPod Touch to type this review so if any words are misspelled
, I apologize
this was great and it's going on my faves. And don't you dare think this chapter sucked cause I liked it.
Keep it up ;)