|Reviews for The Trick is To Keep Breathing|
| Babysis64 chapter 7 . 9/19/2013
good for Charlie standing up and facing Renee and at least he is telling her how Bella is doing she should be happy about that right. Not putting Charlie down Bella is an adult she should be able to make her decissions on what she wants and she wants to finish school there so let her, Renee needs to let her grow up and give her space to do so.
| Babysis64 chapter 6 . 9/19/2013
yeah right Edward just does things for himself he doesn't really think of other feelings this is what i see from him.
| Babysis64 chapter 4 . 9/19/2013
oh i do hope Bella heals from the break up I really do and that she will move on with her life
| Babysis64 chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
oh my goodness it's all of the dazzling isn't it and isn't the reason why Bella can't cope but hopefully she will get better and move on right.
| Babysis64 chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
well I think that was a good bye letter huh, is that in grade 12 or grade 11. He couldn't let Bella know that he was leaving huh.
| dbpbatm chapter 27 . 10/19/2012
Well that left me in a funk. It was lovely and well written though. Thank you for sharing it.
| GeezerWench chapter 27 . 5/4/2012
As annoyed as I am at Edward...
I enjoyed this quite a lot.
You write well.
| GeezerWench chapter 6 . 5/4/2012
| ilivvisis chapter 27 . 1/28/2012
thank you for this story. it was so good and i cant stop crying right now.
the way you wrote it was so original and wonderfully perfect.
it couldnt have been done any other way and i thank you for a such a great piece of fiction.
im crying like crazy and that is always a sign that i have read something truly wonderful.
kudos for being amazing!
| IndianWalker chapter 27 . 11/14/2011
| eysim chapter 27 . 11/9/2011
I just found this the other day and read it from start to finish within that time (3-4 days). I also just finished wiping many tears from my eyes after the last three chapters!. I am a totally obsessed and avid fanfiction reader and am quite particular about what I read. I like angst but usually like HEA, however this story was perfect, amazing, so well written and really "got to me" as it was so real, and maybe more the way the story should have gone.
Although I am not proud of this, I have not taken the time to write a review for a very long time, but I could not just close this story and not let you know how much it touched me. That is what writing is all about. Thank you for going out on a less popular limb to write something to real. I am going to check out your other stories. Hope you are still writing.
| 1853kaz chapter 27 . 11/3/2011
AWFUL! Truly, truly beautiful but awful, I can't swallow. No, no, Edward, it's not meant to be this way. I have a feeling this will stick with me .. You did a great job. Thank you! :)
| Rebadams7 chapter 27 . 11/3/2011
I guess that is one way of looking at what might have been
but she never married
I'm not a fan of adrift children
The stye of notes and letters, emails and newspaper (website) entries was well done
| 1853kaz chapter 17 . 11/3/2011
| 1853kaz chapter 8 . 11/3/2011