|Reviews for Mistakes and Broken Promises|
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/20
A shame this fic has fizzled out. Would it help if i said that i love it?
| Azrodia chapter 8 . 1/23/2016
ohh please please please continue this fic! I love it so much _
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/22/2015
I love this fanfic so much! I read it over a week ago and it's still all I can think about! If you have any intention of completing it, that would just make my year!
| Shizuka23 chapter 8 . 4/30/2015
Hello, I just discovered this amazing story and I couldn't stop reading until the very end. I love the angst and the development of the kids in this story. I truly enjoyed reading this fanfic and I hope that there will be more chapters to come. Edward needs to be with his family. I can't wait to read the reunion chapter! I can't wait for the next update!
| Anonymous The Nobody chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
I really wish this would get updated, I wanna see what happens when Ed gets back.
Maybe someone can adopt it?
| screennamesarelame chapter 8 . 12/29/2014
"The other s should be coming along soon" it's been 4 years.
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/16/2014
. more chapters!
| SoulShirt chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
I thought you said you were going to finish this one. But i guess you stay true to the title. It was a MISTAKE to trust you and you BROKE YOUR PROMISES.
| c.mary.c chapter 8 . 12/5/2014
This is a fantastic story, please update soon! Please don't let this rot forever without an ending!
| Madama Skye chapter 8 . 7/29/2014
This fanfiction is amazing and I hope you continue it soon! You haven't updated in a while and I hope you do soon! I want Winry and Ed back together damnit! XD anyway, great story plot so far. I love it! Please update soon and not take years like that other time o.o
| Celtika82 chapter 8 . 6/18/2014
Overall I really, really like this story. But I hate that she's raised her kids to believe Ed was a heartless jerk who just ran off. He's a freaking hero, and that would have been better to tell her kids. The truth, that he sacrificed his life to make sure the world was safe.
This story is so sad as well. 17 years. That's a lifetime.
| ccatclaw chapter 8 . 6/12/2014
I haven't watched FMA 2003 in awhile, and I obsess over brotherhood, but I really like this! I saw this originally on tumblr, just looking through some EdWin posts. Then I saw this and thought it looked interesting. I got hooked almost immediately. The way you did this is unique and I really enjoy reading it. I believe I followed you on tumblr as Bluestreak1050. But anyway, keep up with the good work and update soon! ;)
| hummingbird802 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
Had to fav it. Good story, you got some great potential for it just don't abondon it and yoh won't regret it. I HATE it when great authors just abondon their stories so don't makee hate you. Anyway since it is already April you should update soon not better time than the present. Anyway I did read all of the chapters and I got a funny thought when ed #2 called ed #1 a bastard...
Ed #2: I HATE YOU YOU BASTARD YOU LEFT US!
Ed #1: *starts crying*
Ed #2: Yay you better cry you peice of-!
Ed #1: IM SOO PROUD OF YOU! *starts crying tears of joy*
Ed #2: *gets confused expression* What the hell are you talking about?!
Ed #1: Your carrying on the tradition!
Ed #2: What fucking tradition?!
Ed #1: The tradition to hate our fathers! I hate my father, you hate you'll father, it's now officially a tradition!
Ed #2: Now thats just messed up...
| Galatea Black chapter 8 . 4/7/2014
i love the story!
| KimTheCat chapter 8 . 3/25/2014
Oh my gosh I can't wait till ed finds out he has children! This is great! Can't wait until you make the next chapter! Its going to be awesome :'D