Reviews for Nom de Guerre |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, touching and exciting. I am glad I was able to read it. Thanks for dedicating so much time and skill to making it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() too long and boring with those oc characters with no contribution to the story naruto has a new jutsu that wins the fight everytime , and is all powerful .. also boring idk why this story has this many likes .. deceiving |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly can't understand how this story has all those likes , your oc are just too many with zero contribution to the story , Naruto has no weaknesses and that just makes a character unrealistic and boring, he comes up with a new finish the fight jutsu every time , and the story is just stuck with so many uninteresting characters the only good written one is sasuke and shikamaru but you only give those 2 lines every 2 pages Also if naruto didn't want his identity to be revealed, why did he keep on giving hints? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the Sai scene and it's cool to see so much Kiba |
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![]() ![]() you know i first started this because the summary had me hooked already but left right after i read that naruto was pleading for sasuke's release and innocence, i thought oh no this is one of those naive naruto fics who's always fixated with sasuke, ironically like from canon! but at the same time surprised as people in konoha hate sasuke, knowing that he betrayed this village once before and not kissing his ass as we can read from thousands of banished/exiled naruto fics before lol! sasuke appearing made me frown, never like the bastard myself, but he showed true promise, and that's why im going to read further! i hope youre having a good day! |
![]() ![]() This is a great example AU fitting smoothly within the bounds of canon. Nice job. IMO, this deserves 5-10 times more favs than it has. Good writing, decent pace, fleshed out OCs, true to canon main characters...probably solid top 50-100 story in the fandom. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() im so stupid i thought this was a one-shot. ignoring that this is really good and the first chapter really lures people in! it’s been a while since i’ve read a good fanfiction :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so utterly cool, omg. Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And it almost physically pains me to read so much romaji. It's eroding my mediocre japanese skills like a nasty poison. I'd rather have the story be completely in one language (English) though if you go for Japanese please, for the love of god, use kana. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If only there wasn't so much boring stuff in-between like Narutos students that nobody cares about or the fights with nameless Oto nins and Ame villagers that should have been offscreened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I probably won't get an answer, considering how long ago the story was updated, but who's Chihiro? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so so so good. Like wow. Naruto is so in character and it hit all the right spots. Thanks so much for writing such an epic story. I also love the quotes you used in each chapter especially the final quote. How fitting! Great relationships. Well written fights. Just a great overall story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter and plot and idea |